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Oh, did you have a subplot POV on the side following the rescue?

No, two of my side characters were spies and they kept reporting the enemy and allies movements back to the MC. Plus, at one point when the MC was captured two of the officers get a message and kind of act startled. They leave the room, but the reader hardly notices…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @theducktator yesss I love KOTLC’s worldbuilding (despite a few points on which I’m like “um, no, that totally breaks immersion, sorry”) but the romance is pretty much half the plot now if not most of it.

Not that I hate that, but I don’t love it either. I want them to just beat the bad guys already.

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Ugh. The series was good through book 6, but the romantic drama has kind of taken over, and I don’t think Shannon Messenger has any idea what she’s doing anymore.

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haha, well, I am a lover of well done death scenes. Especially if the characters and author is a Believer, otherwise it’s a little depressing.

hmmm, well, I just can’t stand cheesy rescue/escape scenes.

uh… let’s see.
Faramir. Don’t know if you’ve read LOTR, but his rescue and recovery makes sense. Gandalf saved him, and Pippin…[Read more]

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If I remember right, he has long experience breaking out of jail, and so somehow lifts the bolt with a length of cord. Or something. I think your theory is entirely possible. It is the Mousethief, after all. XD

It’s been a while since I read it too.

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Agreed. I do think she and Keefe are cute together though. I just wish it would stay a side plot.

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Yeah. *sigh* I think Fitz ought to die. He only seems to exist for romantic drama at this point.

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Mine’s pretty goofy too. I don’t regret it, but I’m a little concerned since I’m going to apply for a job soon. XD

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Yay!

I remember as a little kid, I wanted to have a surgery so I could have extra treats.

XD I used to be happy when I was in pain because I liked the taste of medicine. I also deliberately bashed my head into the ceiling hoping for an ice pack. XD

@whalekeeper hehe

writing rps where my characters are ticked off is always super fun, but then I feel instantly embarrassed after I post them.

@rae

Dante has officially been added to Alpha’s possible threat list….

lol there goes Dante’s free rent. At least he’s not underestimating him anymore.

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I always feel so embarrassed when people ask for my email, because it’s such a bad address name. My dad convinced me to use it when I was twelve, and I haven’t gotten a new address since. 😅

I like it! It’s fitting for a writer. Also, props to you, because I used to be obsessed with making new emails and switching out my address &#x…

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Haha, so true though 😂😂

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Ahh, I gotcha. Well I’m glad he’s doing well!!

I have yet to ask him what he thinks about all this… My brother is the kind of guy who shrugs and asks if he can have ice cream for every meal at the hospital. 😂😭 I remember as a little kid, I wanted to have a surgery so I could have extra treats.

I get that, my brother would proba…[Read more]

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gotcha!

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I think you were interested in this?

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This looks good. I’ll note, I feel a bit of a blur between books. (You’re still in the outlining phase so that’s fine.) It’s great that you have his story divided into three areas of growth, but because they’re very similar when it comes to the actions Alan has to take, you need to make sure the challenges in each book are distinct.…

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Praise the Lord! That’s awesome to hear!!

Is he in pain because of it?? Or is he doing okay?

@theducktator @stephie @ellette-giselle @liberty (How is your KP fanfic coming along? Have you worked on it? I eagerly await the next section) @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @power @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @raxforge @rae @jonas @loopylin @esther-c @linus-smallprint

10 snowballs at each of you! That’s 500 words, and I expect to be s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae @koshka This would have been funnier if i had posted it while it was still relevant, but here

@mineralizedwritings (Hi! How are you? Haven’t seen you in forever!) @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @liberty @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @acancello @anyone-else-i-forgot

Hear ye, hear ye! God willing, t…[Read more]