@whalekeeper
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @the_lost-journal @keilah-h
I rewrote the first chapter with all of your suggestions in mind, do you want me to post it for your thoughts/critiques?
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I’m following along! And I’ll answer any group questions you post; for now, I’ll stay quiet. *Ninja reads*
Yay, glad to hear that!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle (I know you’re away, so don’t feel obligated to respond to this until you get back) @theshadow @whalekeeper @koshka @raxforge
Sorry these are late, it slipped my mind until last night. Without further ado, here are chapters seven and eight (also known as the underground church cha…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay, so I think the way I want to do this is, I’ll give you a list of some of the options I’ve come up with, without comment, and you tell me what you like. I’m also not going to tell you what this magic system is about (though you can probably guess some of it from the names.) After I get some feedback, I’ll give you more context. Right now, I…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @whalekeeper @keilah-h
Sorry for not posting in eight days. I hit Writer’s Block while trying to edit the next story to go on here and writing the next one 🙁
I’m not sure how long until I can post the full thing, but until then, I’m gonna post a snippet of the next…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
I have succumbed. It took me long enough to find them, but it is done.
I had too much fun with this. XD

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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Lolol! I would ask @jonas since he’s the leader of the Adventure one. I don’t know who’s in charge of the others… I’m sure @whalekeeper would know.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah_h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet_pidyon @power @jonas
Please pardon me, everyone…I can’t believe I forgot about the deadline!!!!! So sorry about that…
Well, it looks like all things work together for good since Esthe…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity @savannah_grace2009 @koshka
Please pard…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
Hey guys! So I’m entering a little contest that one of my favorite magazines is doing. Basically they wanted me to finish the letter (they gave me like the first two lines) in under 250 words and they’d publish a few of the submissions they’ll receive in the next issue.
I need y’all to tear into this piece! Give me whatever feedback comes to mind…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @stephie @theducktator
Before I move on to writing the first draft of book II, I want to get a feel for how writing my magic system with the changes I decided to make. I have rewritten Chapter the 30th to get this. What do you think? If you think this works, I will replace what I currently have in my second…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @theducktator
Now that you’ve all had a chance to read the outline of The Sword, some questions:
- As a reader, is this a direction you would be satisfied to see the story take?
- What do you think of the character development you see in this (specifically for Alan, Martha, Eric, and Cyrus)?
- Now that you’ve seen…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
K, I don’t have a young Rory face claim, but this is him when he’s older, (about eighteen) it still gives you an idea of how he looks. He’s sixteen right now, 6’2″, but otherwise looks just about like this, though a little younger.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Sure thing!!! That would be so awesome if you did!
do you want a description or I could just post his face-claim right here.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Miiinnnn, hey girl!! Has life been chill with you?
Hey!!
Most definitely not chill lol. Everything appears to have gone downhill from a outsiders perspective but I feel like it’s the crash before the climb if you know what I mean? Like idk, I feel like I’m finding myself in the midst of all this and that’s something I’ve been missing…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ah! It’s perfect! I love the contrast between the two characters, on top of their similarities.
*stuff a bunch of questionsabout digitizing art back into my mouth*
*stalks the art thread*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Up above.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Wouldn’t it be?
I would love to illustrate for you! I was actually considering starting out doing some smaller jobs for KPers just to see how I liked it and to help out. Prices for a typical professional are well above what most of us can afford. ($2,000+)
Welp. I’m not really a professional either. So this will…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!
Thank you so muchhhhh
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