Enid

@jonas

I think that Character Party was ONE OF A KIND

And that’s why we can’t ever replicate it

Sadly

But like I think I’m gonna remember it for the rest of my life…

@trailblazer @beth-torres

ahh…memories

*sniff*

@theducktator

Thank you! 🥰

@hybridlore

Praying. 🩷

@esther-c

Thanks!! 🤗

@hybridlore

Praying for you!! 🙏🏻 💕

@hybridlore
@keilah-h

okay!! Thanks for the suggestions!! I’ll rework a few scenes.

@liberty

oh man. I have had some of the WORST sprains ever!! One took almost two months to heal!
Roland’s is not as severe, and he has been off of it for four days and as you can see he starts limping when they travel again.

Oooh! I love Dian!

you just love sailor characters. 😝

Is that why you like him? Or for other reasons too?

As for what w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, that would be a cool scene! I’ll have to try to see if I can fit something like that into the story.

@theshadow

Okay, great! 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂

I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.

I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]

@theducktator @whalekeeper

Mateo

Mateo still held tightly to the boy’s collar. Mateo lifted the boy to eye level with him. He stared at the boy. Mateo wanted the boy to feel, a dreadful kind of fear. But not of him, or of anything else, but just fear. It’s like being afraid but not knowing why or how. Mateo had the power to do that, but it was…[Read more]

@theshadow

NICE!!

I really like it! I had hopes for Dylan and they seem to be coming through! Yay!!

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint

So, keilah likes the scene that you have a problem with, linus! This is great. 🤣

Here’s an idea. What if I shift it a little so that the conversation happened a day or two after they had already been on the ship? Do you think that would work?

@raxforge @whalekeeper

Celarent

Oh, wonderful, a winged boy. As if this weren’t peculiar enough. Celarent squirmed. The greatest thief in Laerylia was not supposed to end up in such embarrassing situations. How disgraceful. Not to mention weird. “Let me go! I’m not one of whoever they are! I don’t know who you or bird boy are!” He reached for his knife.

@loopylin now how did I forget to tag Whaley *virtual facepalm*

@the_lost-journal

On behalf of the entire duck kingdom, I would like to thank Potato news 64 for this great honor. Except for Piper. We don’t approve of Piper. With utmost gratitude, and no small amount of concern, the kingdom of the ducks would like to offer foreign aid in the the form of emotional support teddy bears, and our deepest…[Read more]

“Woah. Look out, everybody,” she joked to the rest of the nearby empty hallway.

Nearly empty. Ugh, I hate that I can’t edit typos after a certain time limit.

People must be hungry or something