Enid

@ellette-giselle

That emoji really shouldn’t fit you in mad author mode as well as it does. XD

I see Jillian is having to play a Paul and straighten out churches through letters.

Still sorting out who’s going to die before the end of this book, so you’ve done well there.

@hybridlore

Unless he came back at the head of an army….. 😈

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.

I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.

@hybridlore

Yes, but that was a direct scripture quotation, and I’m not going to add my country names into that. 😉

Are ya now? What if he betrays them?

@freed_and_redeemed

Ohhh, they look so good!!!

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.

Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]

@koshka

Gotcha.

If it’s PTSD in particular I don’t have much. I have research on gas trauma from WW1, but otherwise I haven’t got a ton. I do have heaps of info on things happening during the war. Here’s two I have bookmarked.

h ttps://www.history.com/articles/history-of-ptsd-and-shell-shock

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s651JQxSPlU

@liberty

Black horse for a black rider.

What can I say?

@liberty

that’s all you have to say about that section?!?!

😂

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
November 25th
The Empire

To Wolf, Peter, and the Church in Landstraten,
Greetings in Christ.

Our time in the Capital has been one filled with blessings and the grace of God. We have a sm…

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@rae

That ending won’t leave me alone!!!! Now that I’ve had time to really think about it….. man, it’s good. A delayed hit, but a hard one when it gets ya! 🤣

@hybridlore

No prob! You are 100% last though. 🤣

No wait…. Liberty hasn’t comment yet.

Never mind, you are 90% last. 😝

 

Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.

Yeah.. poor kid.

What do you think of Marius?

@rae

I saw that coming….. sort of.

I didn’t think he’d go back. I thought he would be killed in a fight.

I’m not sure what to think of that. Hmm.I like it, but almost feel doubtful for liking it.

The opening scene with Jenna and Baron may need a little work. It was very intimate and immediately led me to think that they were married.…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Ryla

The boy tipped his hat. He may have been…strange, but he did have manners. “I’m Ryla. Nice to meet you.” She fidgeted awkwardly with her bag. “Do you like cookies?”

@stephie

The best method would probably be having some sort of bodysuit made of bubble wrap under the armor for cushioning.

I just applied for a job. Please pray that I get it. I do have two other places to try if this place doesn’t want me, but I need to come up with 700 dollars by June, and I’m running out of time.

@linus-smallprint

Yay!

Spoken like someone who doesn’t get 7 months of winter a year. I would happily swap my weather for yours, but this is the way it is. Oh well.

I used to want to move to Canada so I would get more snow. I’ve decided I’m too loyal to the USA, but I’ll probably live in the mountains at least.

@koshka

*cries* My fourth grade sister could do better than that.

@whalekeeper

Oh no. Praying.