Enid

@keilah-h

Not sure, but I’m glad you do!! I love all the names together.

@theducktator

Yessss!!!! I am!!!!

@ellette-giselle

You’re FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

Finished essay.

@keilah-h

Thanks!!!

@theducktator

Oooo! I like him!!!

@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome! Here is Ryla’s best friend/love interest Ardon.

@linus-smallprint

haha! It would be a British mystery. I may have to write that……….

Plot Armour!

Oh. You just wait.

He does not get to keep that for long.

I killed Aelic.

Sometimes, it’s nice to keep things simple. Just a few words and normalish clothing.

Honestly though, I love that image.

I’ll want a wedding dress, (…[Read more]

Sprinting at :40 on previously mentioned essay that I’m now rewriting. *sigh*

@theducktator

Aha!!! I had the tune playing my head but I couldn’t remember the name. Thank you!

@FREED_AND_REDEEMED

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE.

@ellette-giselle

Thank you! That quote is from Great is Thy Faithfulness. It’s one of my favorite hymns.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

XD Thank you!

@liberty

*gasp* There are people out there that like Saxon?

@ellette-giselle

That’s good that they’ll be more distinguishable— but I hope that doesn’t mean they’ll drift apart.

Yeah xD It would be interesting. It was a sweet scene though.

@hybridlore

Cool! I feel like this is really where Leon and Julian sort of start to drift apart in personality. They’re really starting to experience different things from one another, and it’s changing them.

I love the idea of Roland and Liesl getting married in their work clothes with their scarves and hats because it’s so cold and they’re…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I liked the transition right at the scene break before Liesl and Roland got married. And how you showed Leon’s state of mind after the fever and how Julian didn’t understand it.

@hybridlore

lolol.

Oh I wasn’t meaning suggestions as much as thoughts about the story.

@ellette-giselle

No, I was just on my phone already and I saw the notification pop up.

Not really… no suggestions really stood out. 🤷‍♀️

@hybridlore

Wow, that was fast.

what were you doing? just sitting there waiting? 😂

That was a pretty long section and covered a good deal of stuff…. do you have any thoughts on particular sections of the section?

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Good section. I’m so glad Leon didn’t die.

@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty   @linus-smallprint

NEXT SECTION!

The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 31st      
The Empire

It is growing dark. I am sitting beside Leon, who is tossing in fevered sleep. Last night we were attacked by wolves, and several of us w…

[Read more]