@whalekeeper
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Beast. *sigh* almost as bad as Smaug the laptop.
Good. I like Jim too! ☺️
Want me to make a moodboard for him?!
Poor kiddo.
Hmm, I guess you’ll have to keep reading to find out.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
KP just ate my post and went really weird…
I like Jim a lot.
I knew his parents were going to die once they hid Jonathan, but before that, no.
Does the story time jump after this, or does the whole book happen when Jonathan is nine?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I know!!!!
Really? Thanks so much!
What do you think of Jim?
Also, did you expect his parents to die?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
( @kyronthearcanin @jonas @power )
CHAPTER 6 and 7!!!!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 2 months ago
This is beautiful XD I love y’all’s.
A woman with infinite real estate teams up with an ex-terrorist to raise the dead but are hindered by the interference of a vengeful former parent who bribes an orphan to work for him.
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I swear it’s not as bad as it sounds.
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
I love that the “mentally unstable” descriptor doesn’t narrow down who it could be in the slightest lol
Hey! lol Yeah, I guess you’re right XD
If you can guess him, try and guess who his friend is then (hint: i don’t talk about his friend too often, and last time they made an appearance other than a possible mention of their name t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@anyonewhoknowswhatimtalkingabout
Should I try to work on my Inky project (my steampunk fantasy story with Felicity and Lois) or should I work on my murder mystery set in modern times with Winifred and Watson the talking cat? I feel equally unprepared for both.
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Loopy replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae I love that the “mentally unstable” descriptor doesn’t narrow down who it could be in the slightest lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
These are all great XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
*posted six days ago*
…whoops.
I’m back now, I guess.
“Hi, nice to meet you. Is this like a job interview?”
Ew, no. This is just for fun.
The comics were written back in the 7990s
7990s?? What year is it now? It’s only 2025 in my world.
Do you have any pets?
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Ruth replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
This one isn’t written but I’ve thought about it:
A mentally unstable man and his mostly stable friend, among an also mentally unstable military faction, seek to end a war with an immortal being.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper Thanks! That’s super helpful. I’m realizing that this is the kind of thing you need a really thorough outline for
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰
I love the smorgasbord of emotions slapped into this post 🤣
I was just thinking about it last night in bed and i realized that what you pointed out about Easton isn’t a huge part of his character arc as far as…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I was not expecting it at all!! 😂🥺
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay. Sounds good.
I know!!!!! Poor kiddos!!
Did you expect that to happen, or did it take you blindsided?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.
and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.
Now… 314???????!
And Jonathan!!!!
nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh my word!! *squeal of excitement* yay!! Well, the next ones will be out tomorrow.
Oh that would be SO COOL. *Hopes and prays temptation will win.*
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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