Enid

@ellette-giselle

Oh, okay. Out of how many pages total?

And are these Word/Docs pages, or like actual book pages?

@hybridlore

Hmm, I’m not sure.

I think we have close to 100 pages left.

@ellette-giselle

Augghhhhh.

Wow, this book felt way shorter than the second one. Is that the case, or was it just me?

@hybridlore

Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.

*goes back and rereads section*

He felt himself shaking and he tried to twist away from the source of the blows but couldn’t. As darkness closed in, the pain began to lesson until all he could feel was fire burning through him.

The overseer struck again and again and aga…[Read more]

Out of curiosity, how far are we through the book by now?

@ellette-giselle

Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.

Also, if Albee is the one to tell him, then we don’t get to see what happens. 🙁

@theshadow

Really know your characters and try to build conflict between them naturally. (There’s probably lots of articles about that, maybe some even on here.) The better you know and understand your characters, the easier writing will feel, especially if you don’t have a super clear plot and are more just following the events of a certain time…[Read more]

@hybridlore

But Albee has…..

@ellette-giselle

*sputters* Then how is Ian ever going to become a Christian? Leon won’t be there to explain it to him, and he probably hasn’t even listened the whole time!

Ooh, great question, @whalekeeper!

My main WIP right now . . . yes, since it’s essentially our world, just in the near future. Although, it will get a little harder as time progresses and the government begins to persecute Christians.

As for my other project, Eidar . . . As long as I had the right equipment. Like Loopy’s world, there are a LOT…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Why not?

@the_lost-journal

Praying!

@ellette-giselle

ELLETTE. You can not leave me like that. Leon can’t die now!

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NEXT SECTION!!

One evening, Julian was walking home alone from visiting a family and bringing a basket of food Adeline had prepared for them. It was growing dusk, and he was almost out of the alleys when a voice hailed him. “You, stranger, it looks like y…

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@loopylin

Noooo!!! You can put Rory in jail, but leave poor Leo alone!!!!!

@rae

AW!!!

They’re so cute!!! I really love that!

They’re super sweet!

@loopylin

XD Mateo would be right on the line of arson and murder, lol

@whalekeeper

I understand that is what Marcel would do, but Mateo kinda already grabbed him when he first fell and Mateo has let go of him ever since

@rae

YAY!! You posted art!