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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I think we are almost two thirds in?
Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.
One note: I was very…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?
The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!
I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅
@theducktator Praying!
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m going to the BMV to take my learner’s permit test. Please pray that I pass.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Perfect!
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Agreed. We could let it move at whatever pace it can without needing to flip back 392764683 pages.
Yes! I haven’t had time to open it up yet (word is on the computer) but I’m hoping to in the next hour (we got an extended lunch break today!!!!).
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
That worked! I’ll read through it later.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱
I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
It just wrapped up, so I should have time now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
No kidding.
Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
The link won’t let me on for some reason.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh no, I completely forgot about that! I’m still interested; it just got lost in the last few weeks of school.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh yes, an email thread would be best.
Oh, did you see that I have a chapter of the first book out?
I greatly needs your opinion!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
I could let him meet the mid-arc Leoron.
*Brain glitches*
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes!!
Maybe we should throw them together in an RP…but I don’t really have time right now for a real one. *Gazes forlornly at the Fantasy School*
Maybe in an email thread. That way we don’t have to work with a school system or wander a Castle.
Hmm. If we both have time (which is a very big if). Otherwise they can just hear…[Read more]
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