Enid

My characters would be totally out of their element in the wild XD

@godlyfantasy12

It’s aliiiiive… it’s aliiiiive… IT’S ALIIIIVE

XD I’m sorry, I had to.

Gus

Gus stood up and slowly veered around the fire, white eyelashes fluttering as he tried to blink away the runes pressing against his cheeks. “Why are you so small? I’ve never seen such a tiny junebug in all my life before.”

Most Horns stood on their…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

It’s okay!! Hard to keep track sometimes, yeah? Here, he’s set up a fire and Nyx can wake up 😊

Gus

Within roughly thirty minutes, red-hot embers were flickering in the air like the souls of fireflies. A small wood pile crackled as Gus sat on a log, staring up at the sky, where he knew there would be an abundance of beautiful sta…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ofc!!

Probably just a structural kind of editing, to see how it flows and if anything feels off. 😊

@calyhuge

Well we’re supposed to stick close to the school… Otherwise it isn’t a school RP anymore.

Maybe you could visit a park?

Oh, and if you wanted, since you’ve got more of a medieval story, you could start a medieval roleplay. A lot of other writers on here have high fantasy characters. That would be cool.

@karissa-chmil

Aw, thank you for the compliment! I read your chapter and the girl felt so alive in my mind. 😊

@calyhuge

Don’t set it on fire or anything too huge tho 😂 Idk if anyone would be able to keep up.

I want to explore the city a little because I essentially write suburban fantasy – I think other people do too – and this place has just so many opportunities!

Oh my goodness, honestly I would love to get into editing as a profession and I’m seriously thinking about it! What books do you use?

And this is a great topic, because I’ve been wanting some pointers ever since… well, a couple months ago. There’s always room for improvement.

So Godly, feel free to tear my heart out and feed it to an…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Marcel

Marcel gave Riker a half-smile, and leaned to one side so Pax might see him.

Pax didn’t notice. He was staring wide-eyed at a bright screen, with a look of complete contentment, and held Leo’s hand.

Marcel brushed a strand of pink fluff out of his eyes. If you guys want… um… I’ll be at the old soda foun…[Read more]

Ah yes, the comically romantic fight scene 😂 And the prejudice and angst for Keida, naturally. She looks different, or has different powers?

Seb’s the opposite in a way. He never has any trouble looking like he belongs in his father’s dimension, even though he was born in another (and he always thought his mother had left them or something). But…[Read more]

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@thearcaneaxiom

Actually that helps me think through my problem better – I have templates available for when I need them, internal conflict and all, I’m just blocked when it comes to the what if questions. As in, I don’t know what to explore. But it could be that I need to take a break and come back to it later with a fresh mind. Thank you 😋

@freedomwriter76

Congrats!!! That’s awesome – you’ll have to celebrate with a huge ice cream sundae or something!! That’s a huge achievement and you should be proud of yourself 😘😘❤️

@thearcaneaxiom

*Telepathy link* Exactly!! There are a million ideas that can’t come from a particular set, and where are you supposed to find templates for them? That’s why you make your own, once you know your concept well enough.

When you really think about it, the what if questions look for things completely outside of anything already cre…[Read more]

I’ve stalked this ever since it started, and finally have some thoughts 😂

For me, I start off free-thinking (or working off a mechanic, as you put it), because like you said, it almost always yields more original ideas. In fact, I get ideas when I’m not even actively thinking – and those… I’m assuming my brain just subconsciously asked what…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Ofc! And thank you!

Aww, she sounds precious 😍😘❤ Oh my goodness, I love babies (our family and church have had so many but I NEVER get to hold them enough 😂)

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks for reminding me of the mechanics topic, I was going to comment but never got around to it…

Yeah – actually, that has definitely been on my mind lately, because I often find myself switching to a better main character who was originally meant to be only supporting. It’s a strange process, but it works for me, because…[Read more]

@acancello

Actually the name Ernest gave me an idea! Thank you!! And yeah, writing them together should help in any case.

@lightoverdarkness6

This is a good point… multiple good points 😂 I would have to adjust any charrie in order to move them in, because I just have to stylize a charrie to that particular WIP, so they can’t…[Read more]