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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Thank you <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c @acancello @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @grcr @anyone-else-i-forgot
Hey guys! Just popping back in to share a scene from Andromeda haha!
This is the new chapter one….XD
I’ve been working on writing a bit and I decided to scrap the beginning and rewrite it! So here’s the first chapter:
Strong arms grabbed…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Hey….sooooo….um….well….
I decided to change my story up…again.
I’m so sorry…I feel so bad because you got like halfway through it and I’m changing it! I’ve kind of been avoiding telling you for a couple weeks because I just feel awful! You’ve been so amazing for reading my book and have helped me soooo much!
I’m still…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
Here we go!! Chapter TWO
sorry if the formatting turned outgoofyIt was a good day. Little One cheerily stepped along the path out to her garden. She hadn’t been in several weeks, not since getting Undiscerned’s letter. But a thrill beat in her heart to be back.
She had been to the Sanctuary everyday. The most wonderful place.
“…Psalmic…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @felicity @starshiness @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in-welcome-to-chime-in @do-you-even-remember-this-2-year-old-WIP? 🤭
Howdy! Little by little I’ve gotten the 2nd “chapter” done. Please let me know if it changes tone too much. I’m afraid that this second one doesn’t have the same…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years, 4 months ago
The Eternal Wedding Feast
The Creator of our great world
Who made Paradise in 7,
Takes 9 months to knit His image
And takes centuries on heaven.
He’s prepared a place before us
While we remain with all our foes.
He’s coming back to reign victoriously
Coming back to take us home.
Can you imagine all the grandeur?
It’s far beyond…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Thank you so much for getting back to me! I’m so sorry I haven’t been around much…life just got so crazy and I haven’t had much time lately.
Writing has been really, really, slow…it’s kinda like I’m procrastinating and just being lazy but also genuinely confused and overwhelmed with my WIP!
Everything does make sense, and I’ll…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years, 5 months ago
Even if that is the only fruit the Lord ever brings from my poems, all my rhymes are worthwhile for the rest of my life. 🥰 You’re the reason I write and your comment made my day!🥲
Beloved by GodÂ
O the lonely hill
The slow hard trudge up
To the top of Calvary
Where Jesus bled,
His heart stopped,
Where my Lord died for me.He…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I suck at making memes…but I tried, okay?!?!?!? XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Wyoh needs to stop eating my posts.
A Buck Wild meme…as requested.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
DID SOMEONE SAY….BUCK WILD!?!??!?!?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, makes sense.
Huh…I have always loved multiple POV first person books, because then you get into the head of multiple characters! But I know it can be confusing, it just never has been a problem for me because in my mind, every character has a distinct voice.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
WHYYYYY
UGHHH
I forgot what I was gonna say
I know! First person books can either be super good or just…cringe..
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
@everyone
Why do you guys hate first person so much?????
It’s just funny because like all my writing friends in real life absolutely LOVE first person, and then on KP everyone seems to strongly dislike it!
I personally LOVE first person books with multiple pov’s….idk…they are just so fun!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
I would say, just use a lot of Abbie Emmons’ advice (I’m sure you’re probably doing that already though XD) and make everything that happens build the internal conflict more.
And about first person…obviously don’t do it if you don’t want to, but I think first person helps bring out the character’s voices a lot more. While the actual…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I hope every apple you bite into is soft
WHAT!?!?! I can only eat apples if they are soft! I hate crunchy apples!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I actually don’t know what my favorite is…..
I love ALL of them!
I’ll just put Fantasy because it looks like it’s gonna win anyways…and it’s the genre of the book I’m writing XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
That sounds so much fun!!!! I love that idea!
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