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Esther replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months ago
Ok, so I thought I made an introduction post but now I can’t remember. 😭 And if I did and you replied but I missed it somehow, forgive me. 😂 So I’m just gonna introduce myself now. 😝
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, teen girl!!
It’s so nice to have you here!
I am the old…
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thank you so much <333 It makes me so happy when people compliment my writing, especially when I’ve been really insecure about it and worrying that it’s not good and I should just quit XD
And yeah, I love that scene too 🙂 thanks for reading!!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @vinagirl
Okkkk this is one of my favorite scenes I’ve written thus far!
May 1887
I knew Albert would be coming home soon, at least, that had been his plan when he left a year ago. Not that I’d heard anything from him since he had gone. I didn’t know exactly when he was coming back, until one Sunday I saw him sit…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@vinagirl (plz tell me if you don’t want me to tag you every time time I post another scene) @hybridlore @svannah_grace2009
More!!
I still couldn’t bring myself to approach Etta as the harvest season arrived. Out of politeness, I attended the cornshuckings with all the other young people, but it felt like the fun was sucked out of them. Every t…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae @vinagirl @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @acancello @hybridlore @anyone-else
Okay, guys. I need serious help. My novel is kind of going nowhere…because I don’t know which way to start it!!!
I have two beginnings for my story. One jumps straight into…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @vinagirl
If any of you have ideas of plot twists I could add, or events that could happen in the story, I’d love to hear them. I feel like I keep running out of new ideas, but I want to strengthen my story and the characters. Maybe I just need to go read some more historical fiction from this time period lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @vinagirl
Here’s the next section! Please tell me if there’s anything that feels superficial or unrealistic. (Raegan, if you haven’t already, you might want to read all the previous posts starting on page one to get caught up)
One afternoon Mama asked me to walk to town for a few things from the store, and as I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 1 week ago
@vinagirl thanks!
I found the cave by accident. Funny enough, I was playing in that world yesterday and got lost while looking for cows🤣🤣 Now I’ll have to find my trail again, and bring my compass with me next time lol
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Sara replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 1 week ago
Wait. You’ve read the Witch of Blackbird Pond too??? (I don’t remember Nate but I read the story…like when I was eight or nine-ish, when I was still homeschooled)
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Sara replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 1 week ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 1 week ago
@vinagirl awesome!
Here’s one:
My dad works for an architecture company and drew me a little plan for me to build, so I did!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 1 week ago
@vinagirl cool!! I’ve got some pictures of my Minecraft builds if you’d like to see them.
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Smiley replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 1 week ago
ok. My favorite movie is either a quiet place or where the crawdads sing. ( I watched these with filters)
So you like thrillers I take it XD I can stand a thriller but horror is too much for me, Lost in Space was just enough thriller for me to like but now be scared of XD But Marvel is usually as action-packed as I can stand
My…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 1 week ago
Hi!! I’m Smiley (real name is Miley) and it’s nice to meet you!! I’m also homeschooled and I write mostly contemporary (although as some know on here it hasn’t exactly been easy for me) I’m another Marvel nerd who may write fanfics… I love reading and I’m a huge book worm also
Questions!!
What’s your favorite movie?
Favorite…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Ahh, I see. So it’s not two kinds of stone, but two pieces of a once whole object. That makes sense now!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@vinagirl Hi!! I’m Keilah. I’m homeschooled too! (a lot of people on here seem to be).
A few questions!!
- Written any fan fictions? That’s virtually all I write these days lol. I recently found out video game fanfic was a thing.
- Speaking of video games, do you play any or is that not your thing?
- Favorite mythical animal? (Technically what…
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hanako replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Hi, Raegan! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m Nevaeh and I’m sixteen years old. I’m also a homeschooler.
Children’s books! That’s awesome. What ages do you like to like to write for? Do you create illustrations for them?
I hope you like it here on kp.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 2 weeks ago
So the significance of the stones.
the stones are in two different necklaces. (And MAN am I struggling with the plot for this book. 😩🤣)The stones were the most valuable assets to a certain country for war, because the medicine made from them not only cures sickness and disease, but can also seal wounds and heal broken bones. So they…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 11 months, 2 weeks ago
You’re welcome, lol!
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