Raegan Aubrey

You know what? I just read it, and realized that that style is outdated and I only wrote this about a couple months go. Sheesh, I can’t even keep up with my own writing!

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

Again,

If I just tagged you and you aren’t interested, feel free to go away.

If you’re still around, and haven’t read the first and second chapter, look up. If you’re still around and you…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah, that makes sense! That’s kind of what I already have been trying to do, but you put it in a way that makes more sense, lol.

@thearcaneaxiom

Interesting, so your getting into a lot of political history and theory?

Yes…or trying to anyway. For now it’s mostly study of documents like the Bill of Rights, speeches and the Constitution.

Cool! My answer would be yes. Leaders can be born or made depending on a few things. I believe leaders can be born because Heavenly Father…

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@kyronthearcanin

I shall remember the paragraph thing! Funny, just a minute ago, I had someone say almost the same thing after I emailed hr my short story!

Thoughts are in italics on my Word document, just they didn’t stay there, when I copied and pasted.

You have no idea how happy it makes me feel when someone says they want to read the next…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah, I get that. My parents also made the decision to not kiss until their wedding day, and it’s amazing how they were able to follow through, especially in today’s society. I think Albert’s part is fine, because he is a lot like the boys in my school, how he teases Libbie and stuff like that. So I think you should leave it in…[Read more]

@sinner4him

Ranks, they are based on posts. oh, wait, you’ve already been told that, never mind.

You can click directly on the Community tab and it comes up with a whole bunch of stuff, select the thing that best fits your book and create a new topic.

@mineralizedwritings

I grew up a really sensitive kid though.

Yeah, same! I used to think scenes from veggietales were scary! XXXXD

@esther-c

You’re good! 🙂

@trailblazer

I thought the same thing as hybridlore, lol. Otherwise, great!

That whole thing about Albert wanting to kiss Libbie and Bert actually kissing Clara made me cringe (which is a good thing!) because how awkward would that be???? AHHHH! But it’s good! I like it!

@sarafini

OH MY GOSH I LOVE ADVENTURES IN ODYSSEY!!!!

but i probably won’t join….because I would rather just rant about Odyssey in general. So should I make a post thread where we can just “argue” about conspiracy theories, the way things “should have gone” (we’d be kind while arguing, of course, haha) or just talk about all things Odyssey?

@mineralizedwritings

It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)

It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.

Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds “cruel” to put my characters so much for the sake of an unhealthy…[Read more]

@power @hybridlore

Great advice!

@mineralizedwritings

Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)

@trailblazer

That’s so kind of you! Thanks!

@hybridlore

Hi! Nice to meet you!

I know…my sister @grcr warned me about that. lol A lot of people seem to be writing fiction, but I think there is plenty of room for both. And both can help to expand God’s kingdom. Hmm…mostly essays for now, but I hope to start on a fictional book soon too.

Ohh…I never heard of those. I will have to look…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Actually, yes. I have been stepped on before six times, by six different horse on the same foot. I work at a stable that has 39 +/- horses, so it’s bound to happen.

It’s not a brand, it’s type of cheese and my personal favorite, try it sometimes It’s really good with celery or rice cakes.

Glad to here you like kp, hope to see you…[Read more]

Hey, if you want to see my writing WIP, I started a topic called “Criticism on a revision draft” My first two chapters are on there.

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @jonas @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

If I just tagged you and you aren’t interested, feel free to go away.

So…If you’re still around, and haven’t read the first chapter, look up. If you’re still around and you have read the first chapter, look down.

CHAPTER 2-…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I do know how to tag people, but who would be interested? I do have two friends, but at the time I posted that, they we nonexistent. Should I just tag people I know?

I like your idea of adding Nahim in, it’s probably the only advice I’ve gotten about this chapter that doesn’t ruin my purpose at all.

Actually, funny you should…[Read more]