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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
ack! I don’t feel like redoing that rp from before, I’ll just ignore it’s poor quality.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Nae
Nae saw Riker’s eye widen, either in fear or surprise. She grasped his hand tighter, hugging her body to his leg. Not out of fear, but for support. After a few seconds, she stepped away from Riker, and planted her feet apart with determination. Looking up at the older man with her innocent blue…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
Ouch. Yeah, I can relate.
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Ruth replied to the topic Story Premise Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
I think my character Alpha would defeat the current dark lord and become the one darkening just so he knew why it happens! Idk why I’m telling you this, he just popped into my head and told me what he would do XD
Have you found out what darkens the chosen ones?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Nar
“It would be a blessing.” She left the last piece out of her translation, Your smile is one. “Officially, I am called a Young Warrioress by my people, some call me an empressling. It may sound odd to you, but to me, ‘miss’ sounds odd too.”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I know….I think Wyoh’s going too far…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@whoever-made-up-Wyoh
your ghost is eating my ideas
@savannah_grace2009 Another victim of our Wyoh!
Don’t worry, you’re not alone, she’s been eating my notifs before I see them, eating Freedom’s posts and cursing Sara to spell tags wrong! 😆
She’s been very busy lately.
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@scoufinch180
I’m finally replying.
How did Nahim get here after fainting in the middle of a hostile environment?]
That is revealed later on in the book. While Nahim thought that it was impossible, someone did come into the grasslandsxand found him. Not Mandin though.
I’m guessing the stone (may I suggest the Opal, heart, or Eye of the…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, I just couldn’t remember if they were courting or not. It’s been a while since I’ve read this XD
I kinda want Chester to change his mind and court Libbie, but it would also really hurt Etta and would cause more drama so I don’t at the same time. lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Wait, so is Etta and Chester dating? I can’t remember XD
And I love it!!! It’s so perfect <333
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Nar
“Nar? I would love to go to the dance with you.” Nar burst in another smile, but before she could answer, he held a finger to his mouth. “But we don’t know each other too well. So I’d also love to buy you some treats before we ride the bus back, and hang out. So you can decide. Is that okay?”
“Yeh! I’d love too! Ih cum len fl…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks for understanding!! I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD but I’m happy that I got an answer from God and that makes me feel a lot more confident.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Idk why but I just feel bad for Etta XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Awww poor Etta!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@acancello @grcr @hybridlore @esther-c
I’ve been praying about this today…and I just got a strong sense that God wants me to keep the beginning like I had it…like the second link.
I just feel a lot better about the way I had it before. I’m not sure why…I just get anxiety every time I think about starting it that way, and feel immediate…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
WHY DO I KEEP SPELLING YOUR TAG WRONG?!?!?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@traiblazer
Well hurry up and post/write it so I can read it!!!!!!!! XD NOW I’M CURIOUS!!!!! lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c Yeah, Liv has blue eyes. She also has blue skin and hair XD
Livia
She heard Fynn say “Aww”, and it was clear who he was talking about. Liv wanted to smack him upside the head.
“He is so annoying,” she rolled her eyes.
“Tell me about it,” Lukas muttered under his breath.
Liv’s stomach came alive with butterflies as they danced…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂
you’re good!!! You can just read it over on these links. I posted earlier in this thread, or I can send you the Google docs link so you can comment and edit. I can’t send the docs link now because I’m…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lol! What do you think I am?
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