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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
……… I think this was the best chapter so far…….. SOOO goooood, but really sad!! And I adore the description and suspense. You also used all 5 senses, which brought the chapter to a whole other level. The mystery, intrigue, beauty… I’m sooo ready for the next chapter!! 💛💛💛 (is that going to be the last one? that’…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Where do you find motivation? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank you so much! 🙂
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Btw, how do y’all get those green format lines on your posts? When I posted my lines, they got kinda messy:)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Favorite Lines of Dialogue from your WIP? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Those are AWESOME lines!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hey! I am new, and love fantasy fiction, in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hi Lucy! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m Abigail, wonderful to meet you:)
You live on a farm too? *high five* and *second high five for owning a temperamental pony XD *. Well, she’s pretty good actually, but whenever I want to ride one way, she decides another way is better. That and she is apparently fond of ducking under trees with very low…[Read more] -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hello Gigi! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
*High hives* that’s awesome that you starting your first novel:) I’m Abigail by the way, it’s great to meet you. Your WIP sounds so cool (I am a number one fan of Peter Pan retellings! Have you ever read The Starcatchers Trilogy?)
What is your number one favorite setting to write in? (I ask almost…[Read more] -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hey! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hello Karilyn! It looks like I’m a little late in welcoming you, but welcome to Kingdom Pen! 😀
That’s super cool that you like horses (my all-time favorite animal:) Which is your favorite breed? Coat color? (personally, my two favorite breeds are akhal-teke and Friesian). And a Bernese Mountain Dog and a Border collie?! Those…[Read more] -
ella replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
to reply to your question on another topic, I might publish my book, I haven’t really thought about, lol!! probably, if it’s good enough. 🙂 Oh, and #1 is called Lioness (for now) and #2 is As Dark As Mist & Shadow.Â
Thanks, that means a lot!! ❤
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ella replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
If it helps you, go for it!!! I think it’s a cool idea, maybe she can do both? Or if not, than mind reading’s pretty awesome by itself!! 😄
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Girl, that was great!! Super fun to read, as always! 😉
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Thanks, girl!!! ❤
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
OOO, YAY!! let me read it real quick and I’ll give you some feedback…
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
It’s good!! I only write about 250 words today, but I finished plotting for one of my POVs, so that’s nice. Just gotta finish the other POV, then I’m all done with that! I just made a word-count goal, which is 75k by the end of the year. Pretty loose, but we’ll see how it goes… 🤞
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ella replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Ooo, cool!! I love the sound of your WIP? (btw, have you heard of/read Dust by Kara Swanson? I think it’s a peter pan retelling and the author is actually from another christian writer’s forum called Story Embers, which is pretty cool!) And yes, agreed, tea is superior. 😄
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ella replied to the topic Hey! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Haha, yeah, I’m probably dreaming about rocking in heels, lol!!! Ooo, I love satire!!!
Oh, oops, I meant plotter and pantser, but i wasn’t really paying attention to what I was writing… again, lol!!!
LOL, my dad has a taco shirt like that actually!! Ditto, tho, tacos are the best.
Yep, caffeine is a writer’s bff. Wel…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
Here are some names I found, but idk if it’s the aesthetic you wanted:
Taeral, Erendil, Wyrran, Ellisar, Luthais, Zhoron, Revalor, Ayas
And if you don’t like any of those, here’s the link to an awesome name generator that you can use:
https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/
Hope this helps!!
-Ella
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ella replied to the topic Hey! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hey Karilyn!! I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!! Nice to meet you!!! Me and my fam serve grated cheese with our fingers, too, so I totally get it. 😉 My family must have been descended from giants, because my brother, who is a senior this year, is 6’5!! 😲 And I’m 5’7 and in the middle of high school!! If I didn’t play baske…[Read more]
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