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@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings

Alright! 😆 Here is mine.

Lane

Lane stared intently at the piece of paper in his left hand. Something was scribbled onto the note, but whatever it said was illegible. These directions never want to work, huh? Tyne never writes things down p…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr

Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!

(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)

(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Hello, Janessa! That sounds awesome! I have a sister who loves to dabble with photography, and once-upon-a-time I had an idea for a novel set in the Victorian era. (I was inspired by the word ‘Pendragon’ that I found while reading a book by C.S. Lewis.)

That’s neat! I’ve had several family members that were pastors, and both of my…[Read more]

@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009

😱 I wrote almost the whole RP and then accidentally tapped on one of the links at the bottom of the page and lost it! 😭 I don’t think I have time to rewrite the whole thing now, but I promise I’ll have it posted later today or tomorrow. 😅

@acancello

You’re right, there probably would be a whole bunch of emotion on both sides. 🤔 I’ll have to work that in.

@hybridlore

I might have to try that. Thanks! 😊

@trailblazer
Good point! Unfortunately, I haven’t really shown any of her favorite things yet. I guess I should probably fix that. 😂

@janellebelovedpig

Wow, that’s awesome you…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I don’t think it’s too summary-y, lol. It fits the style so far very well! I would’ve maybe liked to see the scene with Libbie hanging out with Sara, Lillian, and Etta in a non-summary kind of style, but if they’re not major characters, I think this works best. Great job so far, I’m really enjoying it! 😁

@trailblazer

Looks good! 😁 aw, poor Albert!

@trailblazer

Yeah, for sure! If you want to develop characters more, character questionaires have really helped me. Here’s one I found and have used: https://www.novel-software.com/character-questionnaire/

I love everyone’s personality and how the older brothers want to protect their little sisters. It’s so sweet!

@trailblazer

I hate misunderstandings with teachers! That’s the worst! I feel so bad for Albert 🙁 and I’m so happy they protected Libbie and Etta!

@savannah_grace2009

@lydia-s

Ooo, mushy! I like it.

@acancello @trailblazer @ everyone-else-on-here

So … I’m planning to get two of my characters engaged! Anyone have tips on proposal scenes?

@trailblazer

Okay, that’s probably better anyway haha! But the suspense is killing me! I love good romance, so right now for some reason I really want Libbie and Albert to become a “thing”. lol.

@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralized writings (I think that’s everybody? Sorry if I missed anyone!) Okay I’m bored and I’m procrastinating getting ready for school (where I live it’s 6:30 am rn), so I’m just gonna roleplay. (sorry, @esther-c ,haha) Also, when you RP you can either do it in third person like I’m doing or in…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Also, I have to know…is Libbie ever going to fall for Albert? It’s okay if you can’t say because of spoilers but I just wanted to know, haha.

@trailblazer

Got it! I’d just never heard it before, but it makes sense.

@trailblazer

“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most

practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…

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@trailblazer

Looks good! Didn’t really notice anything to fix.

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @freedomwriter76

If nobody does it before me, I’ll write the first RP either tomorrow or Friday. 🙂 (tomorrow’s gonna be busy, so I may not get to it. 😉 )

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @mineralizedwriting @trailblazer @freedomwriter76

Soo…. When do we begin?

@trailblazer You totally should! I had my mom read it and even she liked it XD

Yes, Hamilton is awesome!!

@trailblazer Huh. Well, I’m not sure about Time Echoes, but I thought Starlight was AMAZING. It actually sorta reminded me of Dragons in Our Midst, in a way. Truthfully I would have a hard time deciding between the two series.

And yeah, I get that. I write sci-fi/fantasy though, so for me I love those genres lol.