@trailblazer
Active 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Well, a lot is going on concerning family relations. Not ones in my immediate family, but with our other relatives. My grandmother is moving out here soon, so a lot is going to change. There are going to be a lot of opportunities to deny myself and serve and love others. There’s also still tension concerning some other matters in the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
😊 How’s life been?
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Yes! I’m glad to be here, again!
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Esther replied to the topic Website is Up!!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 5 months ago
Ok, it sounds awesome! I might try it next year, but I might not be able to fit it into my schedule since my schoolwork this coming school year is more than last year. If I tried it, I think it’d be sort of a way of feeling out if I want to seriously consider the Author Conservatory as a college option. (I know they’re dif…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
And I’m glad you like the idea!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
That was actually my original idea… 😏 I might try it. I definitely agree that it could be really powerful.
We’ll see where the story takes me I guess. I’ll probably try writing it sometime soon. Maybe next month? Although I’m gonna be working on a different WIP over the summer. The plot takes place during the school year, b…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c I love the story story/novella idea…a lot!
But I am going to maybe go against the norm here😂
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I think it would be more powerful if she wasn’t redeemed.
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Hear me out.
If she was a fairly good person in the beginning but allowed jealousy to consume her, though she can be redeemed if you want,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Hey!! Good to see you again!
Ooh, cool! I’ll try my best to get to it soon. (Maybe be summer break, but hopefully before then. XD)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Three hundred characters huh? That’s amazing!! And I love the newspaper idea that’s so creative!
Thanks 😁
My favorite color is probably a nice light blue or sea foam green.
Nice!
If I were going to write a new book now, I would start with characters because I like to get a feel first who I’m working with.
Oh, that’s a good reaso…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Thanks a lot! And no pressure! It’s not like you have to read the entire thing! Whatever you wish to read.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Hey! I’ll try to read it and give you any feedback I may have as soon as I can!! 😄
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Hi!! Greetings from Burne!!
I’m -GRCR-! I’m a fiction fantasy-ish writer, an avid artist, a journalist for my fictional newspaper, and a character lover/creator that has over three hundred. I enjoy listening to music and imagining my characters singing the songs.
Welcome to KP! 😁
Here are some questions for you!!
What’s your…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@esther
Sorry, everyone!
Thank you, Trailblazer, for helping me!
Here is the link to read my book:
file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html
Make sure you copy the entire line.
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freedom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
It is more normal to me, yes. (although I haven’t necessarily been “raised” in this church…only been going to it about 6-7 years now, haha) I believe in such experiences, but I can’t explain how it feels to be in that moment, honestly…words just can’t describe it. Idk.
We all have things we are or aren’t comfortable with, and…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
Does your church believe this too, and does 5 mean that you don’t think parents will be held at all accountable for their children’s actions? I’m not trying to start a debate. I’m just curious.
You’re good, girl! I like discussions! Talking about what I believe is fun, tbh :3
Yes, we do believe in those 5 founding truths. Yes, nu…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
and not all Church doctrine is Biblically sound, either. But I’m not going to get into that.
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freedom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
*Assumption detector* Sorry 😅 I would like to stress real quick, belonging to a denomination doesn’t mean we believe church tradition is that important.
Plus, isn’t church doctrine an organized confession of Christian beliefs? It takes God’s word and summarizes it understandably. It’s just one way of professing and sticking to it. I’…
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freedom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper You’re good. I understand you’re not trying to be rude <3
What did you do then?? 🤣
We stayed in a place of worship for two hours.
Yes, we sang and prayed and did worship for two hours without a sermon.
It was absolutely A M A Z I N G
y’all…like…I still don’t know what to say about it.
I felt God so close. People were…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
My grandparents (on Dad’s side) are Baptist and have been raised that way as far back as I know, and being in the South, most Christians I meet are Baptist, so I’m pretty familiar with Baptist beliefs…but I could still learn a whole lot more for sure!
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freedom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
I went to a church at a camp recently that I think was Non-Denominational. It was fun, but I was kind of confused by the lack of structure. XD
Understandable. Non-Denominational churches tend to be more lenient on how we do things, haha. This past Sunday, we didn’t even have a sermon because our pastor felt God lead him to not do so…[Read more]
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