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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
It is here!!!!
(And, yes, I know I said it would be Nov 1. The reason for the swift delivery is that I realized that it makes more sense for me to plan a little bit ahead, but not plan everything up front. Otherwise, the plan would be too easily derailed by unplanned events.)
Anyway…
INTRO
The premise of this RP is…
Your characters h…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 9 months ago
New people: Andrew ( @raxforge ), Kefa ( @the_lost-journal ), Ellette ( @ellette-giselle ), Linus ( @Linus-smallprint ), Shadow ( @theshadow ), Liberty ( @liberty ), Ducktator ( @theducktator )
I’ll let them introduce themselves if they so wish.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 9 months ago
Tags:
@whalekeeper @loopylin @kielah-h @hybridlore @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @power @rae @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge @ellette-giselle @theshadow @esther-c @arcticanimals @theducktator
idk the new people, so I’m just going to tag everyone who was online recently XD pls fill it in and tag more if you see fit, thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@the_lost-journal I heard that word and could only think of a quote from a character I used for a fanfic. This is him introducing himself in his canon work:
Hey look, buddy, I’m an Engineer. That means I solve problems. Not problems like “What is beauty?”, because that would fall within the purview of your conundrums of philosophy. I solve…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 9 months ago
@theshadow I knowwwww
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Who’s ready for the next scene?
Chapter the 22nd – The Murderer
I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.
The is one character in this chapter that I’m wondering if I’ve gone too far with him. Does it make sense why he does what he does in this chapter? (This…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 9 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 9 months ago
@theshadow to be completely honest I don’t know where most of my ideas come from. I just make them up one day and run with it. TF2’s crazy lore means anything goes, unlike most fandoms where you kinda have to stick to a few rules about worldbuilding, so I can run wild with this stuff.
and lol I actually wasn’t aware there was a real salam…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @rae @theshadow @esther-c @keilah-h @raxforge @whalekeeper @koshka @grcr
I decided to drop a scene from one of my books. Just wanted to see what y’all thought about it.
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It was dark, and Jonathan couldn’t see. He was lying on something hard, and he could sense the space was cramped. Above h…[Read more] -
Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay Shadow, I’m not going to move after this until you’re good to go. 🙂
Barnes
“Good,” she replied to Tenz.
Hugo began to stir. He stretched, and sat up, casually tracing the hearth with the tip of his foot. He reminded Barnes of a stray cat who used to haunt her front porch – grateful for the warmth, but undeniably exploiting…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Good choice.
Awesome, thank you! *Sees the cookie box is already empty* *Refills it with caramel popcorn*
It’s difficult to make this scene clear, because it is confusing from the character’s perspective. He is supposed to not know why this is happening. So… yeah. XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 9 months ago
@theshadow got some hybrid info for you!
- Hybrids of human/anything else usually look like whatever species the non-human parent was, but often with something small missing. Or, conversely, they can be like humans with a few subtle clues of their other parent’s species. Example: Huntress and Scout. Huntress is effectively a full Changeling, but…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@theshadow All righty, I’ll be sure to do that!
@freed_and_redeemed wowwww I’m loving this story! My only issue: I get you’re trying to do a pseudo-Old English speech pattern, so it’s not accurate by any means, but when you say “It ’twas” the T in ’twas already stands for “it” so it’s kinda redundant.
Not anything that diminishes the quality of…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Tenz & Reid
“…Now we can turn to conversation.”
Tenz looked up at her. “You’re a good cook! Omi never could cook like you!” Tenz smiled at Barnes, his legs swinging under the table. His shoes scraped against the stone.
Reid glanced worriedly back at the sleeping form by the fire.
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
…I have actually never had a smore so…I am learning with the charries XD
@theshadow @kielah-h @theducktator @princesachronicle22 @kyronthearcanin
Callyn
Evelyn slid a marshmallow on Callum’s stick for him, perfectly centering it. “It should cook evenly that way, right?”
Callum shrugged. “This…squishy white-thingy whatever it…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Looks like Percival has pride issues XD
Barnes
Reid used Rowan’s cloak to prop up the sleeping boy’s head. The group then ate in silence, the sizzle of meat singing to keep them company.
“…Now we can turn to conversation,” Barnes remarked.
Just don’t expect me to start it.
She took her own bowl of food and set it to the…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @rae @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22
Joy
“Y’know, when I talk about eatin’ beetle grubs, they don’t feel and taste all that different from this. Just a lot less sugar,” remarked Sniper. Huntress whacked him. “Stop that. They’re gonna think you’re crazy.”
Joy nudged Stephen and gestured towards the two with her mar…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Tenz & Reid
Reid thanked Barnes, before drawing the capsule that held Tenz closer to him. He lifted the cover, gently patting Tenz’s shoulder with his hand to wake him.
Tenz opened his eyes slowly, fluttering them a bit before moaning at Reid.
“Ms. Barnes made food, are you hungry?” Reid asked.
“I’m hungry.” He quietly…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@theshadow lol everyone else is like “whaaaat noooo we aren’t a couple” and meanwhile Huntress and Sniper are like “ehh, we already admitted we’re in love with each other, it’s the concept of getting together permanently that unnerves us”
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