TheShadow

@grcr @acancello @trailblazer

Here’s my WIP if you’re interested! And don’t feel pressured to read it if you’re busy (or just don’t want to!, I understand that life gets complicated and busy!

@grcr

Just read this! You did a great job with helping me connect with the characters. They feel so real!!!

I like your descriptions, but like others are saying, they were kind of long. I think it would help if you spread the descriptions out along the chapter instead of making them into one long paragraph. I’ve struggled with this as well, so…[Read more]

@keilah-h

kinda want a teacher to come and yell at them now

Oooo you’ve given me an idea.

@everyone I think I have a grumpy old man who would be a perfect teacher at this chaotic school. I’ll add him later tonight (probably when y’all are already in bed)

I’m not really sure what to write right now…

@whalekeeper

Which character were you going to have join us?

@trailblazer @acancello

Thanks! If you want to read more, I can tag you on the forum where I am posting the whole story and asking for critiques.

I feel so bad for Sef but I LOVE their relationship! It makes me so happy! 🙂

@power

like @lydia-s said: reinforcements have arrived!

Most romantic thing I’ve written (i mean it’s not that romantic but it still makes me happy every time I read it!)

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should ans…

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Okay guys, here’s the most romantic thing I’ve written so far:

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should answer, she knew that hiding would only make him worse, but she was paralyzed with the cold hands of fea…

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@calyhuge

lol Lois would be pretty annoyed if someone called him that.
Can The Cat talk?

Also, what’s with everyone changing their profile picture all of a sudden?? Is there an insecurity epidemic going around??

What Whaley said. :]

@grcr

I hope so!

@grcr  @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Yeah i just tried and the green bar thingy loads but then it goes away and nothing happens. I’ve hit refresh multiple times but it doesn’t work 🙁

@grcr

I tried a half-hour ago and it still doesn’t work :(((

@grcr

I can’t add a pfp either ever since i joined!!

@calyhuges

y’all could put a creepy cafeteria lady in there! That would be fun

ooo that would be fun. I might.

@eudoia-vision

They are currently running through the halls on the way to the lunchroom. It was Felicity’s idea to go. Here’s their descriptions:

Felicity Frost: female, 16, mischievous bright gray eyes, pale skin, long white hair braided down to her waist, very tall, wears plain old-looking clothes, always barefoot, a general elfin/fae look to…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper

Okay thanks Whaley! And yes number 1 is Rishona.

Lol Ezrian is going to be the only actual adult XD He’s going to be like “what is this castle and why is it full of children?”

@thearcaneaxiom

Right, she represents Eve, but is she literally Eve? Is Earth here the same Earth we know, and therefore the story of Adam and Eve is really just a translation of Rishona’s story?

Well I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know but I think what I was going for is that there’s no Adam a…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh those look so cute!!

I think I’ll give Light the chance to rp before I go again if that’s ok.

Okay! Yeah that sounds good!