TheShadow

@esther-c

Hey, I finished your book, and it was really good! I loved the part where Hallie stands up to Katrina and is able to talk to Patrick, I’m glad Patrick turned out to be a generally good, if a little misled, guy. The ending campfire scene where it reflects the beginning is good too, I like how it goes back to the beginning but you can s…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

I feel like I’m just getting the hang of things and now it’s ending!

So relatable lol, and it goes by too quick.

I would love that. I am going to start editing it soon, but I’ve been so busy.

Cool, I’ll check it out soon.

@kydonandwillow

Hello, I’m Shadow, nice to meet you, welcome back to KP! Congrats on finishing your first draft! How has high school been?
If you want, I’d be happy to look at your new draft.

@esther-c

You’re welcome, and now that I’ve finished this next section here’s a few things. This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve int…[Read more]

@jonas

Got it, thanks!

@hybridlore

Thank you, and thanks for letting me know!

@ellette-giselle

Some stuff happened, so I’ll probably be posting the first chapter later today.

@keilah-h

Lol, if he has them XD

@jonas

I’ll check it out (thanks @hybridlore for tagging).

@keilah-h

also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol

Lol, five might be a little generous XD

@ellette-giselle

Thank you! I’ll try posting on Thursdays.

@hybridlore

I’m good, thanks. Thank you for adding me!!

@hybridlore

Hey!! What’s up, how have you been? I’m really sorry that I wasn’t responding for a while, but I’m just about done with the first part, is it okay if I read and give you some thoughts about the second one? It’s really good so far, Everett is definitely my favorite (always love a musical man).

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

It has been a very long time since I last posted on this topic (3 months apparently). First, I’d like to thank everyone who read my draft; it was a huge help, and helped me re-evaluate my entire story.

Second, I re-evaluated my story and have chang…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol, that’s hilarious! Love the little interaction with Huntress, it’s perfect.

@esther-c

Okay, I’m all caught up (also was gone for a while), and this is a really engaging story. I did feel sad when Tyler was gone, so good job there, and I like how everything is going. A few things, I’ve noticed you used something along the lines of “(Character’s name) hated…” to describe what they were feeling, so changing that up a bit mi…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

If there’s any way I can help, let me know. Regarding the chapter, I’ll try to look at it as soon as possible. Btw, if you’re stuck, take a day or two to let your work sit and come back to it with fresh eyes and let your mind wander. That usually helps me when I don’t know what to do with a story.

@rae

Hey, that’s great to hear!!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so sorry. Praying for you and your family ❤️

@the_lost-journal

Praying

@hybridlore

Thank you, and it’s okay. Hope the meeting is going well!

@hybridlore

No, I can’t access the email I sent you. I may be unable to attend this one.

So… I can’t find my phone to access the link…