TheLobsterLover

@samuel-p-robbins Could you allow comments in the doc? You don’t have to if you don’t want to, but it makes it easier to leave more specific feedback.

*A catlike figure, draped in a dark cloak, slips noiselessly into the Kingdom Pen Hall. It slides up to a table and drops a parchment next to a miniature castle. Many apologies, it whispers, then vanishes into the shadows.*

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

 

Vulkasin

The air in this corridor felt heavy, Vulkasin almost had to focus…[Read more]

@wilder-w here’s a “love” poem

Dear Fallen Friend

my Heart is Torn

and Eyes do Burn

till the End

you were Loyal

 

such Sacrifice

Beautiful Blood

Mixed in brown Mud

Thanks for your Life

my Protector

 

you Rose to Fall

oh, Selfless Rose

how Much we Owe

to Guard us all

the Mighty Fell

 

Now we Must Fly

though my Breath catch

I…[Read more]

Look up S. D. Smith (The author of the Green Ember series), and scroll through his social media platforms (Try to go back a couple years) and website. He promotes his stuff through giveaways (Yes, bribes work), goals, and awesome quotes. I have watched his marketing over the past 5-8 year, and he has done very well.

p.s. Even though you might not…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

For my current WIP it would either be the themes or characters, as they are heavily intertwined. It’s the first project I was able to pin down a point of focus before starting the book.

(I don’t pants, however I’m not sure if what I do counts as plotting. I have nearly the entire storyline in my head, but only a few scenes figured,…[Read more]

@emilysf Wow!!! That’s great!

@lydia-s

Totally!!! Of course there are those times they aren’t completely Biblicaly accurate, but I love them anyway. 😉

@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean

Rinzler

“A glass-spitter? Can you tell me more about it?” Feather admired the lizard.

Rinzler was more worried about the fact that it was alive. “In our world, there’s something called ‘impossible ice’ which doesn’t act like normal ice….could they be encased in that? And that’s what’s keeping the creatures…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to get something more submitted tonight, but if I can it will be way late so don’t wait for me. In fact I don’t know if I’ll have much free time for a bit; this week is already cramped.

*Sigh*

Vulkasin

Just at the name Viktor’s face blanched, jaw clenched. His hand trembled…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Thanks!

@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power

I’m doing something different today, and putting my two characters’ perspectives separate.

Rinzler

“If it hadn’t been for the rest of this castle being the way it was,” said Rinzler, looking around, “I would’ve thought Kelvin let his boys loose in here.”

He stepped around an icy table and came face to face with…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean

Feather and Rinzler

“You’re right,” said Feather, “this sure isn’t the kitchens. Maybe it’s a primitive refrigerator?”

Then she realized these characters’ worlds probably didn’t have refrigerators.

“Sorry.” she said to their confused looks. “A machine from my world, that keeps food cold so it doesn’t…[Read more]

@power I love your descriptions! Also, it’s Rinzler who has the disks, sorry if you were confused there.

“The oddly dressed ape-thing…” That depiction of Feather made me laugh. I guess he’s never seen humans before?

@keilah-h @hallie-jean @e-m-trepke

Kent
Kent had been staying in the background. Making sure that none of the other three got behind him or out of sight.
The oddly dressed ape-thing named Feathers was pointing out a door. “I think this is it.  Hesh, Dark Player, can either of you get it open?”
Now this would be interesting to watch. The door wa…[Read more]

@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power

Rinzler and Feather

Rinzler still thought Feather was too trusting, but he went along with the group as they meandered through the hallways.

“Are we really the only ones here?” he asked, looking around. “This castle doesn’t exactly look abandoned.”

“Could be an old World Controller school, like the Sanctuary,”…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Zlatan and Vulkasin

“She?” once again the conversation had shifted to that silent third person. Nyx.

Apparently the fox answered, because Ara turned to Victor and Alyona. “Any idea who she is?”

The siblings glanced at each other. “Ah.” Victor slipped something glinting into his belt. His mantle was…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

I’m sorry y’all. I just found time to actually sit down and write.

Vulkasin

Apparently Lyn had as much a desire to kill them all as his Endurance  Instuktor. The older Vulk’s voice kept calling back to him, Run till you drop, and v’en you do remember, I’m be’ind you. So keep going.

But Lyn was ahead…[Read more]

So this is weird and random, but could I introduce another character? Zlatan and Vulkasin will most likely be disappearing soon (I’m not sure when, but I’m ready for a change), and I’d like it to be seamless. He’s a fox, and I think I’d leave him that way.

@emilysf

Wowsers. =)