TheLobsterLover

@rae

I’m going to pop in and give my tidbit (because that’s so much more fun than homework).

1. Some scenes need to be short, some long, depending on what’s being delt with. This one may be short, but it’s a good length for the subject.

2. No? It just felt like a wrap up description of Mandin/a scene conclusion/transition to whatever was coming…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

My advice as a middle-grade writer and a YA reader:

1. Stick as much as possible to inner turmoil. Instead of focusing on how much the outward character is being damaged, focus on how the inner character is coping/struggling/whatever.

2. Instead of portraying each individual blow/whatever, gloss it all together into a simple…[Read more]

@rae does he use “bullets” as an exclamation? That’s hilarious.

Jaylen

Someone barged in as she tried to figure out what exactly was going on.

“Freeze! Wait…are you a Fettian?! I thought I was the only one around here! Bullets, another Fettian ruining my fun. Well, don’t say I’m breaking any rules at any point in time cuz I’m not despite p…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed I will not be mad at you for torturing a beloved character. I’ll be mad at the ones torturing him, but not at you.

I do the same way too much. Just two days ago, I was listening to video game character death screams extracted from their games and imagining what circumstances in an actual linear story situation would…[Read more]

@theducktator My family had some eclipse glasses left over from the October eclipse (which happened to be on my brother’s birthday lol), so we watched for a bit.

@highscribeofaetherium haha, depending on where you live you won’t have to wait that long. Down in Florida where I’m at, we had one last year also, and seven or eight years ago too.

@loopylin lol

@loopylin idk, I haven’t been here in a while because my group has long since disappeared.

@rae nice! He looks really science-fiction-y, like something out of Tron, but without the glowing lines and stuff.

also I’m good with fangs, even if they look kinda like a vampire’s. I actually LIKE fangs. Maybe that has something to do with my sharp lower canines.

anyway I’ll RP for Hunter now.

Hunter

She looked straight up at him, her…[Read more]

@loopylin haha you can actually, there are plenty of tools for that

Hmmmm…..

Well, she’s gotta meet her dad somehow. How about here?

After realizing what they’re doing to the clones (maybe thinking “oh, I’m next!”), she decides she has to escape. He might try to help her, or talk her out of it.

Well, you could have her ask him how everyone knows her. He doesn’t have to provide a truthful answer….

@evelyn-collins Really?

@evelyn-collins oooh I just read what you wrote recently! The plot is thickening lol

@rae lol! Yeah, over where I’m at we feel the same about gnats and mosquitoes. (“Mayfly” is a better name than “Mosquito” anyway lol)

(oh, and when you add Silvanis, you can probably add him in the same general area if you want him and Jaylen to meet.)

Hunter

Mayfly pointed at him, tilting her head.

“You want to know my name?” He realized h…[Read more]

@rae

Hunter

The tiny creature–female, by the looks of her–reached out to touch his tail. He made sure the six spikes on the end were flat against it so they didn’t impale her by accident.

She then seemed to pick up on his question and spelled something in the air using water, but it was a foreign language to him. She leaped through the water,…[Read more]

@theducktator yeah. It was 🤣

@theducktator yep. He was forced to listen to it on repeat for 48 hours as punishment for a crime, and has never been the same.

@jonas I’m game either way.

Just expect many of my submissions to be absolute lunacy lol

@rae He sounds awesome lol. I can’t wait for my charrie to meet him.

Teleporter incidents? Yeah, Jaylen’s actually no stranger to that. Maybe she’ll tell him about the bread incident of ’79 sometime.

Also, I liked seeing Ilsa’s thoughts. She’s so cute.

@whalekeeper lol Winston is not having it.

Hunter

Something small was moving in the…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom Makes sense!! (Ha, yeah if he stole their souls that’s be really creepy. It makes more sense that he “copies” their minds instead. And it makes sense you could make a kind of AI out of it, too.)

I don’t really consider the roleplays canon either, unless it genuinely fits the story, in which case I’ll make a similar occurrence…[Read more]