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@rae

I vaguely remember that. This new scene is really cute; although it might be a little confusing for casual readers. As a person who knows a lot about phonemes and stuff cause of my very meticulous tutor, I get it, but I don’t know if all the letter sounds and stuff will confuse people.

@theducktator thanks!!

@ellette-giselle ohhh, I understand now.

(I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣)

Just cause you’re a woman doesn’t mean you can’t write impactful things.

Like yeah, the Bible specifically says that only men should be pastors cause it mirrors them being fathers and heads of hou…[Read more]

@whalekeeper lollllll yes

@theducktator oh that’s interesting, my dad is going on a plane trip tomorrow too! Not that early though.

I’ll be praying for both of them.

Other than that, this is a good section, and connects well with your previous ones.

@ellette-giselle

Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heaven will be. These guys are scared and they need a reminder that they don’t need to worry and God will protect them, even if they die. They need to know that it will be worth it, and this can help them see tha…

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@whalekeeper lol

well at least I know one of my guys probably makes it a decent way through.

@theducktator

I LOVE HIM!!!! He’s sooo cute!

ikr??

Poor guy. He’ll find that out the hard way someday. XD

lol we bought the slinky at the same time as Squooshy, so I just randomly came up with that.

He now has a more Night Fury-like tail, which does still have the sharp venom spike on the end. He also has black on his wings, as well as a black “sock” kinda pattern, if you know what I mean, on his talons and ringing his wrists.

Still mostly yellow and brown though.

I believe I also told you earlier I reduced his age from my original…[Read more]

@whalekeeper all righty, cool!

Got some scenes for Crosshair too? Or is he dead in the first ten minutes? LOL in that case sorry Cross

It happened to @freed_and_redeemed, she deleted her account when she decided she needed to take time away from KP but later came back on with a new account.

@ellette-giselle Those two sections were good. I’m glad they saved Hue–not every character needs to be killed off in order for the story to have an impact.

How far are we in the book btw?

@rae yw, your drawings are awesome.

it was so out of left field bruh

our stories are so random lol, and we’ve got this like huge backstory and a whole bunch of myths and legends for it

This literally happened yesterday in our stories lol

context: Our story’s universe reveres humans as their “world-makers”. Huntress, one of my characters, was heavily inspired by myself. The Devourists, a weird sect which, like, practically worships our dog (“the devourer” cause he’d eat our Legos if he could, and the Legos were where this…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Ja, ich muss es noch spielen. Aber! ich habe es schon einmal gesehen”

Google translate is telling me that this means you still have yet to play it (or finish playing it, the words weren’t clear) but are familiar with it…?

@loopylin I’m game for roleplaying again lol

@rae wowwwww

very cool design and I love the lore.

@linus-smallprint i mean like as long as you’re clarifying that superstitions are wrong, then it’s not bad to include it as an obstacle to the characters..