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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle I can see that.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle wow….interesting section! I feel a bit bad for the one who believed right before the priest slashed his throat. But I agree with Leon, the sadness is tempered by the fact that they are in the presence of God Himself now.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’ll stop info dumping on the roleplay forum now.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
since I explained Crosshair’s situation though I’ll explain his:
he was just betrayed by his own family. He was adopted, although his adoptive parents are dead, and when he met his biological parents they were literally just like “nope” and ditched him within like an hour, leaving him and the rest of his team alone in a broken down underwater…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@whalekeeper they really are the GOATs.
Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD
LOL!
it’d be weirder if you did have an emotional connection to him with no prior knowledge of what’s going on.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@trailblazer I remember the Narnia quote!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
ok but looking at it even closer you can see little shockwaves from the bullets right before they strike his belly/chest. That’s DETAILED.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@loopylin @the_lost-journal oh man these are flippin’ hilarious!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@whalekeeper haha! I’m decently nice to my characters…..sometimes. There’s torture on the menu, but it’s not always.
I like the line work on that panel, verrry nice.
my brain: he just got SHOT and is BLEEDING OUT IN A FLOODING UNDERWATER FACILITY and you’re commenting on the LINEWORK????
jk I love the linework too and have tried to replicate…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@whalekeeper LOLLLLLLLLLLL
mentally broken snipers are my boys
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@whalekeeper ahhh whoops!
well since you’ve already been spoiled, I’ll explain: Crosshair saves another trooper’s life, but the Empire isn’t willing to help him and leaves them both to die in the freezing cold. so Crosshair’s just like “forget this” and decides to defect from the Empire (finally).
Not before he nearly freezes and the other guy…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I wasn’t responsible for this either:

slight blood warning I guess? it’s not really that bad but still
hope I don’t get kicked off the site for this lol
he lives btw, he’s all scarred up but he makes it out okay.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Or this:
(again, spoiler warning, I’m so sorry)

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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@whalekeeper lol
Although, in my defense, I’m not responsible for some of the stuff that happened to myÂ
stolenadopted characters.For example, you can’t say I was behind this:
(u did watch season 2 of bad batch right?? I hope so cause if not, sorry for the spoilers)

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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
My older sister is a graduate student there, so yes, but no, my twin is going somewhere else.
*Mournful sigh*
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
It’s close enough to commute, about 40 minutes one way (so not amazing, but not bad).
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year ago
Sounds like you’re all set to me!
Words of wisdom are heavy upon the fingers.
Oh my word. XD That needs to be a tag line
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year ago
Ack, my slow typing…
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year ago
I already have that! Perhaps I have made some better-than-bad choices!
Yay!
…What about the first few chapters of the book, though? I want to set him up as likable then, but the beginning doesn’t include any huge brave decisions because it’s setting up the status quo.
The status quo is him trying to be “comfortable” or whatever, right…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
O.O
Yeah, entering finals and graduation, then transferring to a university for next fall.
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