@theducktator
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
also @theducktator English muffin brain is very accurate.
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Andrew replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Note to Andrew: if you do not write a ~50-word Rax scene, I will throw my arsenal of twenty snowballs at you
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh, fine! Since I got hit with two snowballs, here is a 118-word scene.
“Lord Quakers!” Rax towards the gloomy throne where the tyrant sat, “Your reign has come to an end!” Rax pointed Fortier towards the lord. T…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Don’t worry, he will die a well-deserved horrible death.
😅
I still wish his story didn’t have to end that way😭
@rae @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr @anyone-else-*shrug*
A couple scenes from my WW1 WIP👀
TW: MENTIONS/ALLUSIONS TO AB*SE. THREATS. DEATH. MENTIONS OF BLOOD.
“You lea…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Here is the next chapter. Are you ready? Things are about to get darker.
Another thing. My school courses are finishing up so I have more time to write again! My goal is to get you the epilogue by the end of the year.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Yay, I’ve finally been hit!
*shivers from cold snow* ❄️
He could see his furry reflection in the puddle, though he didn’t really care. He swung his paw and tapped the water, sending a ripple across its surface and a wave of amusement through the small kitten. He continued to tap the water, tilting his head to the side so much that it see…
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*Wakes up*
*Stumbles downstairs and grabs a bowl of cereal*
*Sits down at computer to check email*
*Gets hit right in the head with a huge snowball travelling at the speed of light*
This. Is. War.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@theducktator haha I remember reading about that in one of my history books
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calyhuge replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
weel… the tag for @whalekeeper didn’t work so I guess I’m in for it
I actually want to get a lot, I have a lot of play to write
*mounts snow barricade and waves red flag* “Vive la Republique!”
also I misdid @theducktator
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*falls over, wallowing in despair (and snow)*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUGGGHHHHHHHH!
UUUUURGGHHHHHHH!
HOW COULD YOU, LOOPY?
HMM… WHO SHALL MY VICTIMS BE? AHAHAHAHAHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHA!
*laughs in evil*
Heh… heh…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@theducktator @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @elishavet-pidyon
For all those who I know LOVE the Green Ember series…S.D.Smith is hosting an amazing giveaway! He’s giving about $5000 worth of books/products from his business to 250 winners. You should it out! See the link below.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
I would mostly agree with what other people are saying, but not quite. It is going to be easier to fit in more characters if you have a series over a stand-alone. However, I have read a few series that were long, but still had too many characters. Robert Jordan’s Wheel of Time was an example of this as well as the graphic novel…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
I agree with what hybrid and highscribe said. Definitely consider the length and genre of your book first. If your novel is only going to be 60-70k, I would definitely hesitate adding more POV characters cuz then they each only get 10-15k each and that’s really not a lot in the big scheme of things.
Also consider if each c…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
I try to never have more then 1 MC for a given setting.
So, my last book only had one, but his brother and wife were very heavily leaning toward MC state, and Cora even got her own POV at one point. However, Ethan was the one the book followed the closest.
The one I’m writing currently has three MC in three different locations,…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Agreed with Hybrid and High Scribe. It really depends, if you can manage it then it’s probably okay. As long as your making the different POV’s distinct and add personality to each POV and MC, then it will probably be fine. It should be used in caution though.
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@the-lost_journal @theducktator
Thank you!
Do you guys have a name?
If you can’t tell be the signature at the below 🔽, our name is Anduth.
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
I agree with Hybrid and second everything she said. It really depends on what kind of book this is and what age group it’s targeted towards. 11 is probably a lot if it’s something like middle grade fiction. If this is something massive, like, say, the Stormlight Archives, then 11 is more reasonable (though even SA doesn’t have that…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Question for you after you read the section above (do not, I repeat, do not read this before).
Spaces to help hide the contents:
I already started working on the next chapter and realized that Alan’s reaction to the events in the previous chapter…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter.
I’m trying to come up with a name for the village The Faithful find. Any suggestion?
Also, Ellette, I have included a sample of a casual conversation between guys. This can give you some ideas for some casual conversation for your male…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
It really depends. Does each MC have their own POV? How long is the series, and what genre is it? Typically a long, multi-book series will have plenty of characters, while a standalone may only have room for a few. (However, Gordon Korman is a big exception to this rule. He writes mostly standalone contemporary MG fiction, but he…[Read more]
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