The Ducktator

@whalekeeper

No girl, I love it! I think the key to writing chaotic scenes is pacing. Like if you have a lot of long sentences people are going to get confused, but in your case, you stuck to shorter/mid-length sentences and sprinkled in only a few long ones. It worked really well 👌

@loopylin

Yaayyy the Loops likey

Now I’m really curious what all the characters want their wishes to be. I think I know Dante’s maybe.

So, as it happens, I am curious too. XD I have some idea of how each character would act in a survival scenario, and everyone wants to survive, buuuuuut I don’t know what each character would wish for. I have gue…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

What’s with the havoc potato thing?

@ellette-giselle

Lolol. I got worried for a second… but I’m assuming it’s the main character who I said was similar to Adrian because he died in book 1 and so did his best friend… I think.

(I was worried for Joseph. At this point I don’t know how surprised I would be if you killed him off too. xD)

@rae coming back to our convo from yesterday lol

You have your Aussie, I have my Aussie, and I wouldn’t switch for the world.

The utter absurdity of this phrase though.

How did you decide upon Soldier’s? I’m really curious why he’s part bird (sorry, I don’t remember the species name) with honey-smelling feathers lol

He’s an Ornithifo…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Excellent. I am a dapper potato. *sips tea*

Thank you, O great magic potato.

Now I just need one of those canes that are actually swords ahahaha.

Also.

@the_lost-journal

ok but that’s unusually accurate lol

@freed_and_redeemed

Aww, so sweet! 🥹

@whalekeeper

Love it!! I love your writing style so much actually! I’m not sure what it is, but something about it makes it easy and engaging to read 🤩

@the_lost-journal

Since everyone’s made up and there is peace in the kingdom of pen again…..

Magic potato, havoc potato, what am I?

@freed_and_redeemed

Love the aesthetics!!! They look so good!! 🤩

@the_lost-journal

(I don’t know how close this is to you in real life, once again I did not choose it.)

The magic potato is actually magical at this point!

This is totally Andrew. Like, how is the random method actually picking out the correct potatoes?

@the_lost-journal

Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I?

@ellette-giselle

*ahem* What main character are you talking about? 🤨

@ellette-giselle

Yess! 😁 Gotcha. I remembered seeing him in it, but not much. (I still gotta finish that. Did you post the whole thing on there, even the ending?)

*putting all the pieces together lol* Yeah, I could tell 😢😢.

@ellette-giselle

OH!!! This is the Leon from the RP!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yayyyy!!!! Julian!!! And more people!! 😆

It looks good! I liked the flashbacks into Joseph’s backstory. The only thing was I caught a sentence or two that didn’t flow well— “It was evening of the next day.” for example. Maybe you could change it to, “it was the next evening?” Idk. I’m sure it’s fine if you leave it.

@the-ducktator

I’ll be praying! 🙏

@the_lost-journal

Magic potato, havoc potato, what am I?