TheArcaneAxiom

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Sef

She gasped as the door swung open and shrank back.

Chase strode forward and in a terrifying moment he became a terrible writhing snake.

She watched in awe as he demanded the release of his friend, unsure whether to be afraid or proud of her new friend.

Sorry guys…that RP was really cringe haha! But I hadn’t done a Sef…[Read more]

@canadalily

I have an espresso machine and make my own lattes and they are SO GOOD! Especially a good gingerbread latte…AHHH!

I hope you survive your textbook

Um…I’ll try XD

@esther-c

Liv

Liv laughed. “Yeah…Xandro is a bit impulsive at times.”

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“Man… th-that must be, be tough. B-but I’m glad we’re able to be here for you.” He offered a smile. “Because if it was just you and Xandro, then Xandro might get you in trouble. You saw what he did to me.”

@thelittlejupitertion

Cool!! I’ll have to check it out!

@esther-c

Liv

She inhaled sharply as Lukas briefly pulled her into his arms.

“Thanks,” she sighed, smiling at him, “I needed that. When Aubrielle died…” she sighed. “Our family just fell apart. My brothers and parents were distant, and I’d just felt so alone…and then they sent me to school. All I had was Xandro. It’s been a long time since…[Read more]

@rae

Maybe I wasn’t clear. It isn’t a bad thing that it’s simple. It’s that you spend so much time at the beginning setting things up, which seems overly complicated compared to your central idea. Sorry if that was confusing.

@rae

Really interesting! Would this be the entire plot of the short story? The biggest problem I see is that the plot is quite simple, but it takes quite a long time to set it up. Have you considered using this in a full length book? I think it could make a very interesting character backstory. Otherwise, I’m sure you could make a good short s…[Read more]

@thelittlejupitertion

My dream vacation would probably be to visit Africa, it’s just so beautiful!

That would be so cool!!

Of course, the first character to pop into my mind is Jack. He’s a man made out of yarn (long story lol), and he’s super clumsy and hilarious, but it’s partly a ruse to hide his guilt and loneliness. He also knows a lot mor…

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@rae

Ooh, that sounds really neat, I’d definitely read something like this! I can’t think of any feedback to give rn. But yeah, I love the idea! Tag me if you end up posting it!

@savannah_grace2009

Honestly…I’m not exactly sure why that’s a problem XD I mean…technically…any story can be taken out of it’s original setting and put somewhere else, with only a few little tweaks. I could easily move my story to Earth, get rid of Andromeda, and just change the races to different groups of people.

And since technically…

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@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“Oh… Oh, I-I’m so sorry.” His eyes clouded with sympathy. He wasn’t the one who needed someone’s pity; at least Asher was still alive. He couldn’t imagine actually losing a sibling. He was still holding onto a hope that Asher would change his mind someday and come back. But Liv’s sister… she would never come back. I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae@savannah_grace2009 @loopylin

Rina

“Or I could just unlock it like this,” Rina generated a blue crystal knife on her hand and slashed through the latch.

“Wait, why do you want to get in there?” she said suspiciously.

@thelittlejupitertion

Mistborn would probably be the best place to start with Sanderson (at least of the Cosmere books, which are the only ones I’ve read. The Cosmere is the shared universe in which many of his books take place.) You could also do Elantris, which is his first book, but that one isn’t as good in my opinion. Really you can sta…[Read more]

@littlejupitertion

Welcome to KP! I’m Jonas, more enigmatically known as Cloaked Mystery. I write mostly in the fantasy genre, but usually with hard rules that verge on sci-fi. I like creating magic systems, usually hard ones, but I have a few soft-ish ones. My current project, which I am working on with my sister, @highscribeofaetherium, is a l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae @savannah_grace2009 @loopylin

Rina

As she glared sulkily around the room, Rina noticed a group of people leaving the room and perked up.

Since nothing was happening, Rina portaled after them. She saw them investigating a creepy looking building.

That doesn’t seem very smart.

Rina stepped forward through a portal and popped o…[Read more]

@esther-c

Livia

“I’m sorry,” she looked sympathetically at Lukas. “I know how you feel…I mean, not seeing your sibling. I had an older sister too…but she died a couple years ago. She was killed when the Pythonos raided our town…our family’s never been the same.” she stared at the floor and felt a pang of grief, but managed to keep control…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Alright then, Rina will join them! Typing RP…

@esther-c

I’ve noticed that my story could probably take place somewhere else and not a lot would change.

Honestly…I’m not exactly sure why that’s a problem XD I mean…technically…any story can be taken out of it’s original setting and put somewhere else, with only a few little tweaks. I could easily move my story to Earth, get rid of A…[Read more]