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@godlyfantasy12

YES I DO!!!!!

@godlyfantasy12

(Yeah, I just read the actually helpful stuff, skipped over the rest, and marked out the language with a black pen.)

Oh November! You are putting me into a rhyming mood, which is not exactly safe, at least for my bedtime schedule.

Seriously though, the poor BABY!!

@godlyfantasy12

Go on, go on! *Florishes one hand*

(You’ve read ‘Save the Cat!’ too?)

Poor November…

*deep, heartfelt sigh*

@freedomwriter76

Wow. You just wrote that today? This is first draft? I am…

*Groan*

You painted a vivid picture of this character in my head, and when he screamed I heard him. I have a definite love/hate relationship with this type of character. They wring my heart.

Because they’re real.

They’re all around us.

@freedomwriter76

Awesome!

Yeah, the only good series I’ve found is Promise of Zion, by Robert Elmer.

Weird random question; are your Jewish MCs Messianic, Orthodox, or something in between? (I’m supposing they’re not just by heritage, but they could be, I suppose.)

@freedomwriter76

Thank you!

*Having snooped through all the rest of this board*

I love that you’re writing stories during the healing period after WWII! I haven’t found many good books set in that time (well, besides a couple nonfiction stuff, but anyhoo).

Here’s a collage for a novella I haven’t even hinted at on here, (So conniving) mostly as it has not a working title.

Or character names. For anyone. (I’ve written most of the first chapter without even an idea yet. And I plot. Not pants.)

Anyway, here’s my MC!

@godlyfantasy12

Aaaggghhhh! All I want to do now is somehow drag your published work out of the future, curl up in an invisible corner, and trade this world for A’Grend.

*Sigh*

The impossible wishes of an imagination.

@godlyfantasy12

*I sand in stupefied wonder at the door. Such an intriguing hall, such high stacks of locked chests hiding who knows what secrets…*

What gave you this idea!?

I have so many spoilers, most of them back-stories for charries. Like the reason behind Viktor’s best friend’s loathing of Dorwinian boots. Or which certain MCs will end…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh, and thank you for sharing! It was good.

I’m often too hesitant to share any of my actual work, but I need to stop that. 😉

I hope your day continues to get better!

By the way, I totally get the whole tragic-story-makes-you-cry-even-though-you-wrote it thing. Especially when it’s based off a real event. I may have a few of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oof, that’s HARD! And well done wrenching out your reader’s heart strings. 😉

Your story sounds amazing, and from what I can tell from this clip, you’re writing over a time that is often ignored in YA historical fiction: the season of healing. Am I right?

By the way, if you are interested in the Jewish side of WWII, have you…[Read more]

*A catlike figure, draped in a dark cloak, slips noiselessly into the Kingdom Pen Hall. It slides up to a table and drops a parchment next to a miniature castle. Many apologies, it whispers, then vanishes into the shadows.*

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Vulkasin

The air in this corridor felt heavy, Vulkasin almost had to focus…[Read more]

@koshka (’cause I know this of all my WIPs is your favorite.) @joy-caroline @godlyfantasy12

I have made another random collage. This (submitted above) one is for Winifrith Aetheling, a MC from my Kingdom of Shadows series. I really liked how it turned out, especially since I didn’t envision something I’d hers being in that color scheme.

For…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Yes! It’s such fun.

You saw David?

Totally not jealous. (I say sarcastically, a small smile touching the corner of my mouth.)

We have been listening to the soundtrack/music for it as soon as it came out.😂

Thanks!

@kathleenramm

I LOVE world building, and my characters are very dear to me. I can spend hours on the first, and the second have been introduced to my friends and family as acqaintances of highest regard.

However, what I like best about both of them, is how they contain bits and pieces of real stories. Even my WIP that would not at all be…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

First, my apologies for the belatedness of this response. Thankfully I haven’t forgotten that I didn’t reply yet, as has happened on occasion. (If I ever don’t reply to something for a looong time, that is probably exactly what happened.)

Medieval Fantasy has been quite the adventure to write! I don’t know if I’m good at it or…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

For my current WIP it would either be the themes or characters, as they are heavily intertwined. It’s the first project I was able to pin down a point of focus before starting the book.

(I don’t pants, however I’m not sure if what I do counts as plotting. I have nearly the entire storyline in my head, but only a few scenes figured,…[Read more]