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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yess my poor girl.
And yess. I do love Roger so much (especially in chapter 27 we show him being SUPER SWEERT and i’m dying of feelsss) our morally grey character that is the fan favorite, BUT Nathaniel aka NATE AKA CINNAMON ROLL BOI will always have a special place in my heart.
Oh yes. I got a message the other day of one of my…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 loll i’m not gonna say names, but it’s ok. I just think when I publish i’m going to send him a note and say “To the guy who said I could never publish: Thanks for the motivation. :)” bc yes, spite was a great inspirer to never give up.
But thank you!!
And actually I think awhile ago, like a lonnnggg while ago I sent in chapter 4…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
OH and our Villain >:) General Seznick

(This snippet of what will be done in a future chapter 0.O)
“Stop me?” My harsh laugh echoed through the warehouse, “Silly little girl, don’t you know? You won’t be fighting me. You’ll be fighting them.”
My smirk grew as the kids, the other soldiers, she knew and grew up with surrounded her with…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago

“I’ll find you, Grace.” I whispered through the tears.
Was it a pledge or a plea? A desperation to be enough or a doubt that I ever could? Would I find her just to loose her again?
No. I couldn’t. I won’t.
Two stone heads burned in the back of my mind, two names scrawled on top.
No. I couldn’t lose her too. I won’t be the only one le…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago

“Till death do us part.”
Sickness. Dearth too soon. Closing with another promise.
“I’ll keep her safe, I promise i’ll keep our baby safe.”
Intruders. Cornered by soldiers. Gunshot killing my sunshine.
“No, please not again.”
Pain. Crushed by guilt. Anger coursing through my veins.
“You’ll pay. You’ll pay for all that you’ve done.…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Also, (I’ll reply to all yall in just a sec) here’s the graphic/aesthetic of each of the MC’s and a lil kinda about them snippet.

Who was I? Was I anyone before? All I had were foggy memories of white walls and pain, and some sinister feeling that I was missing something. Did I have a family before being in this camp? Was I somebody? Or am I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @princesachronicle22 That used to happen to me too….Fortunately it doesn’t happen very much anymore.
I also used to switch between first and third person, back when I was just beginning to write. That was kinda annoying.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Whew! Ok. I finally got to this! XD
Everton
A grin found its way onto Everton’s face. Break down a door? Of course! If only he had come up with that idea…
“I’m in!” Ev said, looking to Ty to see what he would say. Ty sighed.
“It’s worth a shot,” he said. Grimm nodded.
Ev glanced over at Aloth. He leaned close and lowered his…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Oh God, Where Are You? in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Just read this…
SO TRUE!!! Such a good poem. It carries so much truth. I agree with what @lrose5 said,
I could rant for a while about stuff in America but I won’t… Like it’s confusing but I’m proud to be free but not at the same time. Originally we were free to be Christ-like but now we’re free to be whatever. And that whatev…
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Esther replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Cute!
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Esther replied to the topic Encouragement for the Weary Writer in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
@gywndalf-the-wise , this is the topic I was talking about. 🙂
@everyone-else
“One generation shall praise Your works to another and shall declare Your mighty acts. I will speak of the glorious honor of Your majesty and of Your wondrous works. They shall speak of the might of Your awesome acts, and I will declare Your greatness. They shall a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
That sounds super interesting!! I’d read it! 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic ✨Memes✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
🤣 Those are great!! XDXDXD
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Esther replied to the topic How do y'all keep your focus on the Lord while writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
…You asked a loaded question… Welp! Here we go! XD
So my thoughts:
Keeping God first when writing is really hard. It’s in our sinful nature to do things that glorify or bring recognition to us. And it’s a temptation that’s hard to resist. Fame is not bad! Don’t get me wrong. It’s just that when that’s all we look forward to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@princesachronicle22 Totally fine!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin you see my last RP yet?
@princesachronicle22 awesome! I’ll add him in now. He’s probably a teenager, but I’m not quite sure how old. Wears an Imperial cadet uniform, carries a small pistol.
Oh, and one thing. My tag is “Keilah-h” with my initial at the end, I noticed you missed that.
@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
Allen
Wher…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
@theloonyone Thanks! It was this one right?

I mean, the boys look good for sixty…… (I legitimately call them that in my head sometimes)
@loopylin I love that art, lol. So they’re all the same size? (I remember how short the girls were)
@freedomwriter76 Yeah, the Nightlights were so cute!!!
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KattheWriter started the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.
I thought he had changed.
I thought he cared.
He did it.
The thing I never thought he would do.
I felt like I was in a haze.
The noise of chains met my ears.
He said he understood.
He helped me.
How could he?
I staggered and gripped the bars harder.
He said he would…[Read more]
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