Starshiness

@freed_and_redeemed

Praying for y’all!! <3 We have similar warnings in our area.

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooh, I’m kinda struggling with something similar with a new WIP idea.

What I’ve been starting to notice is that you have to weigh the importance of each scene. Is each scene impacting the MCs arc in some way? How does it move along the plot? And sometimes some scenes will feel slow, but that’s not always a bad thing. Brain…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad I could offer some helpful input!

Ooh, can’t wait to read this next chapter later today!!

@keilah-h

Hehehe… 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks so much!! That’s what I was going for! 😊

Also may or may not have just almost tagged you as easter-c XD.

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I had Sunday school teachers when I was young that would spell my name that way. I was so confused how anyone could get my name wrong!! XD And now sometimes my friends or siblings call me Easter jus…[Read more]

oh, kinda random, but do any other Minecraft players here log on April 1st and check out the April Fools’ Snapshot?

This year has a ton of potato jokes. Last year’s allowed you vote on random silly features. The year before that removed the inventory and forced you to only be able to carry one block at a time (along with a brilliant joke…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings thanks! I’ve done two already.

@theducktator @highscribeofaetherium I see…..

Unfortunately, the only thing we can really do is ask the hosts of the site what’s up. There will be no ghost killing from our side of the server.

@freed_and_redeemed they better be fine!

They’ve gone through a lot already!

@stephie

Even if that is the only fruit the Lord ever brings from my poems, all my rhymes are worthwhile for the rest of my life. 🥰 You’re the reason I write and your comment made my day!🥲

Beloved by God 

O the lonely hill
The slow hard trudge up
To the top of Calvary
Where Jesus bled,
His heart stopped,
Where my Lord died for me.

 

He…

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@rae was my post eaten? ugh

but yes, I agree completely with everything you said.

@esther-c I love charries too much also lol

@princesachronicle22 lol

@rae @savannah_grace2009 lol I love the memes

@rae

Ooh, this looks fun! I’m not sure if I’ll be able to join (I’m already so behind in my other rps! 😭) but I might eventually. I’ll probably stick around and see what happens first. It looks really fun.

@savannah_grace2009

I forgot to tag you a second time in my post. Part of my rely to you is the last quote and paragraph on the post above the post above this one. (That’s unnecessarily complicated…. XDD)

@keilah-h

I honestly don’t mind multiple POVs from first person, because the time I read it, each chapter was labeled with the character’s name so you knew who was speaking. But yeah, I see how it could get confusing.

@stephie

Yeah, plotting is probably one of my weaker points of writing. 😂 The extent to which I plot varies from story to story and I’m not sure if that’s a good thing… XD

Another suggestion would be to try and write the worst first draft you could possibly write. That’s how my dad got more than 100% on a university level essay.

I may just ha…[Read more]

@keilah-h @grcr @lightoverdarkness6

Thanks!! Scenes like these are what get me excited about this story. I love these charries too so much. 🥰

He’s not actually my charrie lol, so I’m not to blame for most of that trauma btw

@esther-c I write alternately from first or third. It really depends on which you like better. I wouldn’t do it just because that’s the mainstream, though. I also wouldn’t do multiple POV’s from first person, because that would get confusing quickly.

Honestly, I should just start writing the random scenes that show up in my head instead of…[Read more]