Brianne

@hybridlore @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @kathleenramm @spinner4him @lightoverdarkness6

(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

Ok, here’s the third chapter! It may be the last I post of it for a while if at all, but we’ll…[Read more]

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @spinner4him @smiley @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper @anyone-else-that-might-be-interesed

Ok… I’m so excited because I’m finally sharing my WIP idea for NaNo!!!

I think it’s the only WIP that I’ve actually put a lot of thought into before actually…[Read more]

@spinner4him

It sounds really interesting! I’d think I’d have to know a little bit more to make any suggestions, since this is just the blurb, but it sounds awesome!

As for title ideas… I have no idea. XD The others’ suggestions are good. I’m terrible at coming up with titles. 😂

@spinner4him

Oh my goodness, I love that! if you post any of it on KP, please tag me, I would love to read that!

@spinner4him

I struggle with titles a lot too!

I usually just wait until the title comes to me (after all, the story’s more important than the title), and sometimes I have a temporary title until I can come up with a good one. I would say don’t rush it, because if you’re anything like me, it’s a distraction from your actual project and you’ll…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @spinner4him @hybridlore @keilah-h @smiley @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @anyone-else-because-I-probably-missed-a-ton-of-people-XD

Here are chapters three and four of the second book in my trilogy, with the working title Through the Forge. For those of you who know who he is, this is when Adrian is first introduced…[Read more]

@spinner4him

So it isn’t literal then? They are still cognitively present, simply robbed of all real sense of will and individuality. That’s always a fun theme to explore. I enjoy the discussions and themes of things that destroy will, especially will that is freely given away.

@spinner4him

Cool! What happens to the souls of the soulless ones? Do they simply die, the bodies simply reanimated, and the souls go to where ever souls go after death, or something more sinister?

The right title I think will come with time. As you develop the story, the name will develop with it. Regardless, here’s a few ideas:

If you want to…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Titles:

The Witch-queen

For Home

Ninione’s Curse

The Price of Life

Songweed’s Salvation (Note: I like the town name:))

The Fellowship of Six

What’s the lost heir about?

@spinner4him

Sounds great!

@hybridlore @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @kathleenramm @sarafini

@spinner4him

Alright, I might as well post the second chapter now. I’m not entirely sure about this one, and I think it needs to be a bit longer, but it helps clear up a bit of the fog from the first chapter, at least I hope so. Can’t wait to…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Here’s the link to my WIP.

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

If you have any critiques, please reply to this thread and tag me! Thanks for being interested in this! 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think I’ve fixed most of the problems we’ve discussed? Anything I need to work on in the “new” chapters?

@spinner4him

Okay! Great! I’ll tag you in the thread.

@spinner4him

I got that notification, but then the page didn’t come up! Yeah, Kathleen should be able to help. KP goes through a lot of different glitches, so I wouldn’t worry about it too much.

Have you tried it again since then?

@spinner4him

Oh no! Oh no. I’m sorry. Above I was tagging you, but I just realized I said “@sinner4him” I’m so sorry! The things I do🙄.

@spinner4him

Hi! I don’t think we’ve met.

I’m Sara, and I love all things music. I know a few chords on the guitar, I took piano for 6 years, I took violin for 2 years, I sing harmony on the worship team, I’ve played flute for four years, and I play piccolo as well (It’s a TINY flute that plays an octave higher. It’s SUPER LOUD!!! and annoying,…[Read more]