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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
You’re right, I think it all comes down to personal opinion and morals and your own personal boundaries. If someone wants to write about magic, I would say go for it, as long as they’re careful. And I agree that it is very controversial. I’ve just chosen not to put “good” magic in my story, because that’s just what I believe and what…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
oh yeah I remember reading that, I just didn’t put two and two together haha! Like you said, I just took it as that’s how long she lived there, not how old she was.
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Probably best that way
I of course had to read it the sad way… I always do XD
Thanks!!
There’s a deleted scene AOU where Pietro is handing out stuff to some Sokovians and that was some big inspiration for it
Totally recommend watching it XD
I’m still mad that Marvel deleted a few scenes of Wanda and…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 Joke’s on me, I forgot I put it in the first sentence! But if you aren’t paying attention, it’s easy to miss. It’s vague, and you’d have to assume she was living there since she was born, so I should probably clarify that a little, but it’s there.
“A dull ache filled my heart as I took a last look around the house I had called…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 No, that’s a good question! I didn’t even realize I missed that, but she’s thirteen here at the beginning of the story.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
It’s really good! I like it! One question:How old is Libbie? Or does it say, sorry if I missed it, I kind of skimmed it.
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Trailblazer started the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @anyone else interested
I thought you guys might enjoy reading some of what I’ve written and giving some feedback! I have many WIPs but this is my historical fiction featuring MC Libbie Hopkins. I don’t have it divided into chapters yet (I get too locked into structure when I set up the chapters…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
I love the name Lilitu as well! Another one of my favorites in my story is Sef, and I absolutely love Ottoline’s name!!! And Marcurious. I guess I might be a little biased, haha!
But thank you! I’ll pass on the message to Lilitu…haha! Right now he and Sef are running through the woods to evade the Pythonos. He’s a little busy, but…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
I want my allegories to be recognizeable for Christians, and its okay if others see it too, but it’s not going to follow the Bible exactly, and hidden to some extent. So it’s totally fine if lots of people recognize them! I guess it doesn’t matter, however I want to make the Bible/Bible stories interesting and exciting for those who…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
wait sorry I just realized there’s like 417 pages never mind! so i’m guessing that’s a no.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Is there room for one more?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone just love Eragon by Christopher Paolini? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I hope you like it! It can get a little graphic in violence at times, but it’s nothing too bad and it’s really well written.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr @acancello @jonas @hybridlore
Guys don’t you find it weird that there’s 907 members on KP (it says at the bottom of the screen when you click on “community”) and there’s only a few that are on here a lot? WHERE ARE ALL THE OTHERS? haha! I’m kind of hyper, I had a double shot espresso right before my volleyball game…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Sorry, i’m not good at explaining things, especially my stories! All I know is that Earth is the same Earth, and I think that Adam and Eve don’t exist either in “stories” or anything. I think that I’m trying to make this story for the secular world to speak truth (i think sometimes if the world knows that somethings from the…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
Yeah, as you said Whale, it definitely works, I’m just trying to figure out what the actual structure is in relation to reality, as real places such as earth are mentioned. Your answers Sara are still throwing me off because “I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone just love Eragon by Christopher Paolini? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I just picked up this book at a yard sale because I remembered you said you loved it, lol! Haven’t read it yet, but I’ll let you know what I think!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
You are so lucky to have a mom who you can go to for advice on writing! I love my mom and she’s basically my best friend, but when it comes to writing, I’m on my own. She doesn’t like the kind of writing I write because she gets really sad and depressed when the scenes are sad. Same with my dad.
I had to teach myself how to write up until…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years, 1 month ago
@lydia-s if you want to read more I’ll tag you when i post this chapter!
Thanks! It’s one of my favorites!
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings
I was inspired by Pinterest and Freedom’s wonderful story to write a fic about Wanda and Pietro celebrating Christmas!!
Now you have two options for reading this
One: you can pretend that Pietro’s lives and that this is just a sweet story that will never end
Two: You can cry
I did…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings
Okay Y’all
Freedom’s wonderful story and Pinterest inspired me to write a story about the Maximoff Twins celebrating Christmas in Sokovia
Now you have two options, you can read this story believing that in this universe Pietro doesn’t die
And if you feel like crying, you can read…[Read more]
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My hands were shaking so bad!
Yeah. I’m guessing there are people who joined and basically just “left” but didn’t delete their accounts.
@jonas
yeah it’s kind of sad 🙁 I love KP
A lot of people joined a long time ago and are adults now, so don’t really have time for KP I guess. Other ppl join and then NEVER come on. But 907 does seem pretty high.
Also there’s an age limit, so once you turn 25 or something like that, you can’t use it anymore. I’m not sure if your account is deleted after that, but yeah, basically what @highscribeofaetherium said.
lol, yeah… I think about that often…. 🙃 Cloaked Mystery is probably right.
By the way, if at all possible, do not drink double shot espresso before a game. (totally not speaking from experience)
lol
I saw this post called “character castle” and I really think it’d be fun, but there’s already too many characters, so should I make another one, and if I did would you guys join?
If you don’t know what a character castle is, there’s one in the section “general writing discussions” I believe.
Oh, sorry this is late! If you make another, I would definitely join!
okay! I’ll tag you when I do!
Yeah, like Highscribe said, they might be adults and not have time, or just super busy people 🙂
I think there is a Character castle 2.0, but its not as popular as #1, I think @freedomwriter76 and @whalekeeper and @godlyfantasy12 know most about it 😀
@acancello
I was also thinking…what if I made a “character castle” without a castle, in a different place, like “character treehouse” (okay that sounds lame, but you know what I mean) or “character birthday party” or something like that?