@smiley
Active 1 year, 6 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
- Total Posts: 2243
-
Esther replied to the topic Hear ye! Hear ye! The Ducktator doth cometh, bearing greetings and pancakes! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
That sounds very inconvenient to live under. No wonder your characters want to get out. Does just the Orb shrink, or does everything inside it shrink too?
Oh yes, very inconvenient 😑 lol
Just the Orb itself
I’m terrified that by the time I get to experience 4 feet of snow I’ll be too old to enjoy it. XD
Lol! For real XD
-
Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Umm… my immediate answer would be Leon. I find him more relatable in a general sense and for some reason I just love him more. XD I wish I could give you more of a complete answer, lol. I guess I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said.
And that scene….
Girl!!! They’re smuggling Bibles together?!! I love that!! 😆
-
Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Thanks!! 🥰
It was because i saw a pic of a girl riding piggyback with a guy and I was like, “I need to put this in my book!” XD
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Pastor Nikolai Aleksandr Smirnov and MGB Agent Peter Dimitri Kuznetsov together as the MCs of a novel would be fabulous…I’m getting ideas already…oh no XXD
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@koshka Yesssss, it is possible. It really is 😂
His book/arc would highlight persecution/speaking up when the rest of the world is silent…and I think I have an idea for who the 2nd MC could be…
Nikolai and Peter as the MCs of a Soviet Russia novel would be a lot of fun :3
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@koshka Hehe, I’m glad you’re excited!!! That’ll be quite a bit of their 3rd book, so I’m glad you like it😂
Yesss, I love it too <3 I like him already…he may get his own book at some point😆
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-heh-I-can-think-XD
I have this possible scene for Leon/Riker’s 3rd novel!!!
There’s probably more to this scene, but I haven’t written the rest of it yet and wanted to share what I have so far✨
I love them so…[Read more]
-
freedom posted an update 2 years, 5 months ago
I recently released that Riker has a bit of a tick…he’s always running his hands through his hair when he’s stressed/worried/afraid…you learn something new every day😆
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Glad we could help XD
Yesss, thank y’all for all of the help 💕😂
now to just figure out what to do next in my WIP🫠😆
I’m on Chapter 10 rn; I’m planning on Chapter 12 being where everything really starts to come to the climax, being that Chapter 12 will mark exactly one year (in the book timeline) since Aadelheide’s death and will…[Read more]
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper I love how y’all may not completely relate to them, but you understand them.
Wow, this is giving me such a confidence boost😎
XD
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Tysm for the response!! <3
I also love the honesty and I honestly love to see how you love them both for different reasons💖 and yesss, Riker loves kids so much, which is adorable🥰
He is, at times, the more Christlike of the two, which makes me want to shake Leon on occasion XD
😂That got me XD
I apologize…aren’t breaking hearts…[Read more]
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper I appreciate your honesty😂 Yess, I’ve begun to see how the two of them parallel each other as I’ve started writing (and it wasn’t originally on purpose, fyi😆) so I see what you mean.
Thx for the response tho!! <3
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@grcr Ty for the response!! I’m so glad y’all can relate to Leon <3
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Thank you for the very beautiful response!! <3 That’s exactly the kind of thing I was looking for😂
I really love how Leon has grown, bc when I originally started writing his story he felt so fake and I struggled writing him so much because I couldn’t relate to everything he went through, but as I’ve grown I’ve realized that…[Read more]
-
MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh, interesting question…
Well my kneejerk reaction is Riker because I feel so bad for him but honestly it’s got to be Leon.
Here’s a couple reasons why:
Leon feels realistic. He’s lost his spouse, been in the concentration camp, and now has to start over. It makes sense he might become a alcoholic.
Leon’s character arc…[Read more]
-
freedom changed their profile picture 2 years, 5 months ago
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @lightoverdarkness6 Forgot to tag y’all🫠
⬆️⬆️⬆️
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @smiley @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @acancello @keilah-h @anyone-else-lol
Soooo I’ve been really thinking lately…and I’m really curious to kinda see everyone’s opinions on which MC in Freedom’s Fire is their fav.
So (and I’m pretty sure I…[Read more]
-
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@acancello Aww, thx girl🥰🥰 That means a lot to me <3
-
MineralizedWritings posted an update 2 years, 5 months ago
I would love some plotting help from you guys if you have the time! I’m thinking about starting one of my stories as a webtoon and I’m wanting to work out the kinks first.
I’m tagging you guys because it’s a lot darker than my other story and I didn’t think you would mind lol.
Basically, there’s a point that could be a…[Read more]
-
It’s so funny that I (and Loops now?) have a reputation of being fine with darkness 😂 Am I darker than the average person?
Ooh, okay, so is this female scientist going to have a redemption arc? Either I would assume that by reading from her POV, or I would assume she is only going to be an initial POV character as an intro to the world and s…[Read more] -
Ooo I love this story idea.
So you’re asking if the scientist lady should be forced into the experiment in the first episode or in a later episode, right?
I agree it’s a great hook, but I guess it depends on how much world building and stuff you want to fit in before that happens to her. Maybe you want some time to show what her normal life loo…[Read more]-
@loopylin
Thanks 🙂
@whalekeeper @loopyThank you guys so much for your feedback! Showing a bit of her normal life before could be a good idea…. hmmm I’ll think about it.
Lol, I can just tell. I can’t remember what it was loopy said a long time ago but somehow I knew. Oh, and when Whaley told me abt her dragon prince pfp she warned me abt…[Read more]
-
-
I’m…uh…intrigued already
-
a little dark, yes, but it can also show something beautiful if handled correctly. If you feel led to do this, then I say don’t shy away from it <3
-
-
I am loving those themes. I feel you there, girl…it really does sometimes feel like Christians don’t understand. My BFF has dealt with a lot of mental health, so she does understand, but I know what you mean <3
I absolutely love the idea.I'm doing well! Juggling school, church, writing, family, and all of the things, 😂, but doing well! I've…[Read more]
-
@mineralizedwritings
The string of commenting on comments is maxed 😂
*Is probably more bothered by the darkness comment than I need to be* Most of my writing is composed of jokes and exaggerated candy metaphors! 😭 That stupid human Pokémon story will never leave me. Never.
Any I love the redemption idea. I’ve never actually tried a redemption ar…[Read more]-
Oh I’m sorry I didn’t know it would bug you! I just tagged you and loopy because I knew it wouldn’t disturb you, everyone has different tolerance levels. I didn’t mean to say you are a dark person 😂
Thanks!
And thank you for the prayers! <3
Lol are you infj too?
Btw how are you doing?
-
It’s okay 🤪 I think there are specific types of dark, and I lean into a different type than others do on here. Like for some reason a lot of people here don’t write or read dark humor? But tragic/tortured/abusive backstories are common and detailed. It’s a weird combination of preferences, and I have to admit I don’t identify with those prefere…[Read more]
-
Also I’m sorry if I sounded pushy over the whole darkness topic! 😖
-
I get that, maybe it does seem odd to other people. Dark humor is pretty much fine to me, Ig just depending on context like anything else.
I think on kp where the *line* stands seems odd because it’s largely dependent on religious beliefs vs some standard. Like, most of us here are not comfortable with ‘creepy’ stuff. For example,…[Read more]
-
That’s interesting. I analyze other people, but I also analyze myself to a further extent. I want to understand all the things my subconscious is hiding from me so I know exactly how I work XD
Ah, freezing fear of college. Well, I’ve got a freezing fear of Uni. College isn’t so bad, who cares what people think anyways. You’ll have a…[Read more]
-
Riiight, so it’s a distinction between objectively bad things/creepy/bordering on dark magic. I’ve understood the magic issue to some extent, it’s just a lot of the in-between stuff that bothers me.
Side note, I was into Veggie Tales and Pixar 🙃
I’m sorry for the little rampage here 😅 But someone can describe the details of their charact…[Read more] -
Ah, yes, the elusive subconscious 🤣
I’m almost definitely taking a gap year. Whenever I tell a well-to-do mom I’m not going to college right away, they’ll pause, and their eyes go glassy… it’s funny but intimidating because I’m not living up to expectations.
The Katara thing!! Yeeess!!! I absolutely hated that! My dad rolled his eyes, and I had t…[Read more] -
Ah, I see where some of the confusion is. I think the best way I can explain it is that for the majority of the people here, creepy isn’t a shade of dark, it’s an entirely other animal that isn’t ok. I’m not trying to say your doing something wrong, just some people won’t be on board. It’s something that for me changes with exposure.…[Read more]
-
Lol, that’s interesting. Well you should be proud for picking what works best for you, instead of doing the popular thing. You’re living up to your expectations, not theirs. Isn’t that important? 🙂
Ikr? And honestly such a wordly strange way to approach it. I’ve read writing advice to use walking in on somebody to further a romance…[Read more]
-
-
-
-
-
- Load More
lol Tauren too
haha, yeahhhh
Riker probably bites his lip more than anything, followed by the hair thing. But he’s also used to avoiding eye contact and fearing the worst and all of those things, poor boi😭
Oh poor boi 🥹please give him a hug for me?
I think the main reason Tauren has the running his hands through his hair thing is just so I can describe that he has fluffy brown curls 😂
*gives Riker a massive hug* You don’t have to tell me twice <3
hehe, that's always a bonus😂