@skredder
Active 6 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@gh24682468999 Also, having your MC’s personality different than your sidekicks personality can be more interesting and realistic than if they are the same. Â I guess, all of your characters will be different while always having a little of you in them too.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Critique for my Kinda Sorta Fantasy Novel in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia. Ooh, I love it! Â Now I want to read the whole thing!
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@gh24682468999 *squeals* Characters are the best part of writing/storytelling for me! Don’t ask me how to create intense plots or even good pacing.. But characters? 🙂
Disclaimer, I doubt I know as much as I think I know about characters, and i’m pretty bad at explaining the stuff I do understand.
Okay so I think with character development t…[Read more]
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice
Im unable to access wordpress at the moment (our household has a add blocker thingy that interferes with certain websites sometimes) but ill have to remember to check it out at some point!Don’t worry! Long posts don’t scare me! (as long as its a topic as interesting as writing 😀 )
A while back I had an idea for a retelling of…[Read more]
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Hey! @celticcailin I’m pretty clueless when it comes to music but I think @jess-penrose does music? (maybe??)
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@annaberens. Hi! Â Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! Â Do you know how to post topics and such? Â Glad you are here!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@celticcailin Hi!  Very few of my songs turn out fit to sing. 🙂  Do you feel comfortable posting any of your songs so we can see them?  (Its totally fine if you don’t.)  Sounds like you already have some better advice anyway. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@gh24682468999 I think my favorite thing about writing is creating my characters!  I never thought when I began writing that I would feel so close to my characters.  Sometimes I’m like, “I am so sorry I have to put you through this, my dear character, but its for the best I promise!  You will triumph in the end!”  🙂
Is it your characters per…[Read more]
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Bella B. replied to the topic Outlining – Love It or Hate It? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
I’m a planster. I plan the 5% of my story that counts (not really plan; just like “this happens” then “this” then “this” than done. That’s it) I planned out over 30% of one of my stories and I can’t even get 1000 words through!
On the other hand, I started writing a random story because I was bored and I had no idea what was goin…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine 😛
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seejustice Okay, so ya know how I said I’d start reading it tomorrow?
I finished it.
I literally put off studying for a test to read it 😛 (you should be proud and concerned) 😉
It was awesome! 🙂 I can’t wait for more.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice No problem. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Yay! I think I should be able to start reading it tomorrow 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder Yay, thanks! 🙂 I’ll get to these as soon as I can. Enjoy your trip!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder aw, thank you for reading it! 😀
I do have a question though: Jane said that I was struggling with telling instead of showing, how do you think that was in this chapter?
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic KP Literature Character Search Corner in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
Name: Kapeefers know her as ‘Notta Writer’ but her real name is Amanda Write.
Species: Human
Appearance: Round face, pale skin, blonde hair with reddish highlight -usually in a bun, dark blue glasses that frame her blue grey eyes.
Personality: Awkwardly shy, anxious, a little bit of a cry baby (but never in public) artistic, and empathetic.
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice I’m not here because I am writing but because I have a question for you specifically and didn’t think it worth creating a new thread. (I hope that’s okay 😉 )
Anyways I know that you like to write stories that are retellings and would love to hear your general thoughts and advice about writing them. 🙂
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariella-newheart I’ll draw him if no one els wants to? 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Thank you for your prayers!  God has given some pretty clear direction, even though its not always been what we would have chosen. 🙂 Please do keep praying.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@skye Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! Â How old are you? Â Do you like to draw? Â So glad your here!
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