Critique for my Kinda Sorta Fantasy Novel

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  • March 26, 2018 at 10:41 pm #68843
    Alia
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      Hey y’all. I have the first three chapters on my novel done, and I was wondering if anyone could beta read them for me.

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jE8pdrlJ6s3Ht0Mdq17jnMoGLGbV3q_GkpJFF3E88Ds/edit?usp=sharing

       


      @catwing      , @rochellaine, @whoever-else

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      March 26, 2018 at 10:46 pm #68845
      Catwing
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        @alia I might be able to tomorrow. NOw I must sleep. 😛

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        March 26, 2018 at 10:48 pm #68846
        Rochellaine
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          @alia I’d love to read it, but do you want the critique in comments on the document, or do you want it here on the forum?

          "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

          March 26, 2018 at 10:51 pm #68848
          Alia
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            @rochellaine, I just fixed it so you can comment on the document now.


            @catwing            , sounds good

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            April 5, 2018 at 3:07 am #70108
            J.A. Penrose
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              @alia Sure thing!

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              April 5, 2018 at 10:25 am #70123
              Ariel Ashira
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                @alia. Ooh, I love it!  Now I want to read the whole thing!

                "In a mask, was he?"

                April 5, 2018 at 5:20 pm #70133
                Alia
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                  @ariel-ashira, my plan is to have it done by June. So be on the lookout then for a way to read it then

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                  April 5, 2018 at 6:48 pm #70141
                  Ariel Ashira
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                    @alia Wonderful!!!  😀

                    "In a mask, was he?"

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