Critique for my Kinda Sorta Fantasy Novel

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March 26, 2018 at 10:41 pm #68843
Alia
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Hey y’all. I have the first three chapters on my novel done, and I was wondering if anyone could beta read them for me.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jE8pdrlJ6s3Ht0Mdq17jnMoGLGbV3q_GkpJFF3E88Ds/edit?usp=sharing

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March 26, 2018 at 10:46 pm #68845
Catwing
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@alia I might be able to tomorrow. NOw I must sleep. 😛

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March 26, 2018 at 10:48 pm #68846
Rochellaine
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@alia I’d love to read it, but do you want the critique in comments on the document, or do you want it here on the forum?

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March 26, 2018 at 10:51 pm #68848
Alia
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@rochellaine, I just fixed it so you can comment on the document now.

@catwing, sounds good

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April 5, 2018 at 3:07 am #70108
J.A. Penrose
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@alia Sure thing!

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April 5, 2018 at 10:25 am #70123
Ariel Ashira
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@alia. Ooh, I love it! Now I want to read the whole thing!

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April 5, 2018 at 5:20 pm #70133
Alia
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@ariel-ashira, my plan is to have it done by June. So be on the lookout then for a way to read it then

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April 5, 2018 at 6:48 pm #70141
Ariel Ashira
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@alia Wonderful!!! 😀

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