@skredder
Active 6 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@livgiordano Are you the one who wrote the poem “Broken”!!!!????
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Okay, sure.
I think you were pretty detailed. You could describe the room and the people’s faces a little more.
I have a good idea of the guy. His face is not clear in my mind though.
The emotion was good. It wouldn’t be bad if there was more though. A few words describing it a little more would help.
I would def…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x I like it! Its really good! I think its well balanced with the things you mentioned. What era is it? Modern?
Do you and livgiordano know eachother?
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariella-newheart Yay I’m glad you like it! 🙂
Hmm.. Let’s see.. Ooh! You can draw Aspen! 🙂 She’s fun to draw. She’s a fantasy character.
Tall, elegant.. Her race is similar to elves but also different. She has long, thick, wavy, blue hair. Oh and lots of flowers in her hair! 🙂
Brown eyes. Her skin isn’t dark but it’s far from light (I’m not…[Read more] -
Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder The sequel of my fantasy series. 🙂 And I actually have to go eat dinner now because I have to leave. (I have play performances for a show of Cinderella every night this week…) Talk to you later!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder @rochellaine I’m joining for a limited amount of time… 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Whoops! I wish I could help you finish the dishes so you can come sooner…
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Are you working on your western?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder Haha that’s awesome! 🙂 *goes around the house saying it to family members* *laughing at their weird looks* 😛
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine so sorry, I won’t be here 🙁
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Im on for an unknown amount of time. Might have to go shortly. Working on characters for The Crimson Cup.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Could you guys pray for the relationships in our family and extended family please? Can’t go in to specifics, but I would sure appreciate it.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder Will do! 😉
“Carrot in the cookie jar” 🙂 I don’t think I’ve heard that one before 😀
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Oh no! I hope you find it!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder Awesome! Like I told others I’m reading for, I probably won’t get to much of any of it until Monday or Tuesday. I’m looking forward to it! 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kindly critique this, will you? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!
@ariel-ashira YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!
@daughteroftheking Thank you kindly. And yes, those are some good points. *strokes chin*
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Sorry, I couldn’t join you writing today 🙁
I have a question for you though: What are some good family musicals to watch? (cuz I know you don’t like musicals 😛 )
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@valtmy Praying!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbas13x Ooh, this is starting to get really exciting! 😀
(you scared me with B-bot by the way 😉 )
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