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@trailblazer

Those are great! I may share some more later, I have a billion and its so hard to choose from 😀

@smiley

Oo great!

@sarafini

I love it! They look so happy together.💗

This is a picture of Blair and Isabella that I drew… but they don’t look like they’re 21… lol… 🤐

(Blair didn’t turn out as good as I was hoping for… but yah… I don’t know why I erased his name…)

@freedomwriter76

Cool!

I think everyone is still (at the Baumann house) trying to start conversations… but nothing ‘major’ has happened. @whalekeeper ‘s characters have come to the house, and are outside in the carriage (I think)…

@whalekeeper

Yeah, that makes sense! That’s kind of what I already have been trying to do, but you put it in a way that makes more sense, lol.

@kyronthearcanin

lol! Thats how I’m feeling… I might have to share side characters or something….

@trailblazer

Yeah, I get that. My parents also made the decision to not kiss until their wedding day, and it’s amazing how they were able to follow through, especially in today’s society. I think Albert’s part is fine, because he is a lot like the boys in my school, how he teases Libbie and stuff like that. So I think you should leave it in…[Read more]

@spinner4him

@jonas got it, but if you have any more, let me know! 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

I grew up a really sensitive kid though.

Yeah, same! I used to think scenes from veggietales were scary! XXXXD

@sarafini

Lol, ok, that makes things easy for me then😂

Ok, so you have an amnesia story. Sunny wakes up in a mysterious land he doesn’t know. So what is this land like? Is there magic? Is there strange creatures, is the land itself shaped in strange ways? Do fundamental parts of reality such as gravity carry different weight (hehe, pun…[Read more]

@esther-c

You’re good! 🙂

@trailblazer

I thought the same thing as hybridlore, lol. Otherwise, great!

That whole thing about Albert wanting to kiss Libbie and Bert actually kissing Clara made me cringe (which is a good thing!) because how awkward would that be???? AHHHH! But it’s good! I like it!

@sarafini

Oh, sorry, lol. I take the jargon for granted. Hard worldbuilding means a more concrete flushed out world that the readers can understand, whereas soft worldbuilding is more open possibilities where anything goes.

@spinner4him

It would probably be best if you started your own page. You can do that if you go to Forums: then look for Critiques, then Novel Critique requests, then you should be able to make one. I hope that helps!

@sarafini

OH MY GOSH I LOVE ADVENTURES IN ODYSSEY!!!!

but i probably won’t join….because I would rather just rant about Odyssey in general. So should I make a post thread where we can just “argue” about conspiracy theories, the way things “should have gone” (we’d be kind while arguing, of course, haha) or just talk about all things Odyssey?