Scoutillus Finch

@scoutfinch180

This is a great Villain! he’s got a solid personality, values, and reasons why he does what he does. I think I know who Alpha is though😉😉! My one caution is not to let him off too easy for what he did, even if it was out of revenge, and why did his race get killed off in the first place? did they have a bad reputation?

Thank you, I…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Hey! I really love your picture of Deerfoot!! He looks so cool!

@scoutfinch180 ok not gonna lie, Deerfoot is not a bad name. (It sounds like a warrior cats name, and I love those…heheheh)

@scoutfinch180

Is the Labyrinth considered a lost cause because it’s nanian-infested now?

The Naians never found it before they were driven from Laxor. Not even most Realn know where it is. If you want, I can go into its lore, but that’d be a beautifully lengthy post.

is the queen the only sentient nanian?

Her, Vorgan, and Vorgan’ brother, N…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Just pulled this from another forum…

 

I think that is all I have for now on Glace.

Btw, this all happened over a hundred years or so, since Fettians and Realn have long lives (thinks to some immortal blood.)
#HugRikerSquad
#LetsCauseChaos
BEWARE my charries know how to make swiss cheese! XD
November 3, 2023 at 10:11…

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@scoutfinch180

This chapter really hooked me! I’d love to see where it goes!

Thanks, I like strong beginnings and endings when reading, so I try to do that 🙂

What themes/messages are you pursuing?

It’s kinda a “coming back” story mainly. Nahim doubts God (called Ehyeh) a lot, questions Him, so on. Nahim is a Christian, but rn, he’s having a t…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Yeah, I really need to get going again on my Realn grammar. I have random words, some essential rules, and an alpha bet that needs work, but otherwise nothing.

@scoutfinch180

Uh…depends on your definition of “better”.

Yes, I would like that.

His accent shows in random places, since he sometimes suppresses it. His wording every once in a while may sound off since he is a Nayhelm, and they often have a thing I call ” Nayhelmic terms” that are basically how they specially pronounce certain words. His…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 I know I haven’t replyed yet, but i got a idea and am trying to run with it, plus I’ve been sick. @whalekeeper @grcr @jonas @hybridlore

Chapter 2: Nahim, the Last Nayhelm

the first part

 “Nahim. Nahim!”

Mandin waved his large hand in front of his 19-year-old friend’s hidden face. “Nahim, what’s up?”

Nahim seemed to be the only…

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@scoutfinch180

I love those!

Deerfoot has a recognizable design and a clear silhouette, I think. He seems like a cheerful, charismatic guy who’s maybe a bit adventurous and care free? (I can’t focus enough to read the writing rn) Also, I like really like the name Conri, but I think you should also keep Deerfoot as a nickname or something cuz it…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Sorry, my internet decided to crash for the exact thirty seconds I tried to post my reply. I’ll reply again tomorrow 🙂

@scoutfinch180

I’m sorry I read this a while ago but never actually responded. (Lol I tend to do that a lot.) I really like it so far! The plot is really intriguing and so is the world building.

Also, I can re-read it later if you want me to give more critiques.

@scoutfinch180

Also, you should update me when once Sound of Silence is done! I’d love to see it

@scoutfinch180

Yeah I’m still storyboarding my first episode… and I also need to work on world building some more. And perfect the character designs. But at least I do have a title! Lol

I’m doing mine in a book format, though I like both formats for different reasons.

I think the ending is what I’m struggling most with actually. I think it woul…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Those sound really cool!

I’m kinda actually struggling with the plot right now, but it’s about two tiny alien sisters traveling around in their ship, trying to find their places in the universe and having a bunch of misadventures along the way. It’s currently very episodic, but later on I’ll introduce a larger plot.

@scoutfinch180

Aw, thanks! He’s an alien character from my space comic book. His name is Dante and he has fireproof skin. Technically he’s a side character, but he’s kinda taking over the story lol

@scoutfinch180 I LOVE that idea! What if? stories are fun.

Here’s some more! They’re mostly from the TV shows so sorry if you don’t get who/what they’re about:

• What if the Ghost’s crew (from Rebels) picked up Luke instead of Ezra for some reason?
• What if, instead of the Bad Batch’s inhibitor chips not activating (except one’s), there was…

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@scoutfinch180 cool!

What do they write about?

@trailblazer

I’ve thought about starting at the party, but as you said I feel that there might be too much going on

so I’ve tossed around the idea of her starting when she gets to town, or not starting with her and actually starting with Jordan and Payton, and them talking about everyone coming home

but truthfully I still need to figure out the…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

I don’t have time to look at the whole thing, but from the first ones, It’s really good! I don’t see anything really I would change. I personally like large lettering, but that might not be your taste. Your poses are so dynamic! In general, the flow is really good, and the smaller panels to show details are a great addition. I…[Read more]