Scoutillus Finch

@princesachronicle22

You’re welcome!

Yes, I’m thinking that it’s his only option. And the earning Vital makes sense, it would be in an insanely high demand material, which would make it extremely expensive. But it also needs to be semi accessible to the public so people survive. 🤔 It would create a very interesting economy dynamic I think, I’l…

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@princesachronicle22

I think your idea is rather interesting! I might as well give my two cents, but for me, if a romance winds up in my stories, it tends to just kind of happen, I’ll just be thinking and I’ll realize, “oh, they make a good couple!” or something along those lines. So, do take my cents with a grain of salt lol.

I recommend…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Definitely! I never properly researched the era when I was still in Highschool, but it really was a fascinating time in history!

@freed_and_redeemed

Yess, another Sabaton fan!!!

Also, I totally get nerding out over WW2, my husband loves the topic, and so I wind up learning a lot by extension lol!

@loopylin

Oh, cool!

Angus would say that he dosen’t think he was always immortal, because injuries used to heal a lot slower than they do now, and he would decline for you to pet Wolfy (he’s bad at naming things, and it’s a nod to an old stuffed animal I had) but Wolfy would make you pet him anyway.

Lenora, who’s responsible for the…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ooo, what kind of magic does Lois use? (sorry if you already answered this question lol) How does the magic work to cause spells?

I guess I’ll introduce my character:

Angus (name could be changed later, idk): A stoic immortal soldier with a pet wolf/big dog who gets stuck making sure two teenagers don’t get themselves killed on his…[Read more]

@Rae

I gave you my thoughts!

Also, I’m so sorry to hear of your loss and I’ll be praying for you and your family 🥰.

First off, this is a great improvement, you’ve done a great job! I did give my opinions, but again, I’m not a professional, so take my criticisms with a grain of salt, and don’t be frustrated with yourself, this is one draft of wh…[Read more]

I hope all that was clear lol

@koshka

You’re fine!

Ahh that makes sense!

Beyonders is a middle-grade fantasy trilogy, and it’s quite well-done, but not written from a particularly Christian perspective, (I think the author is Mormon? but it doesn’t greatly affect the story, but a certain character that only appears for a brief time is similar to the oracle of Delphi)

The…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

@every-one else who commented on here gave such good advice as I’ve struggled with this myself!

I don’t know if it helps but in one WIP I had to set aside for the time being (it was too complex, needed to take a step back to reorganize later), my God-figure was included like you demonstrate, but was treated more as an enigma or…[Read more]

@loopylin

Those look really good! the one on the far right really reads as sci-fi, and I love the claw feet!

Welcome back @godlyfantasy12!

@evelyn-collins

Hi! I’m @scoutfinch180!  Nice to meet you!

Interesting to hear you write fanfics about Ghibli and Star wars, I sometimes listen to What if videos on Youtube. What kind of fanfics do you like to write? And I can totally see a Ghibli fanfic working, I’ve sometimes wondered how a sequel to Spirited Away would go. My favorite Ghibli…[Read more]

@loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h

Ah I see, thank you for the clarification!

@keilah-h

and thank you so much! I hope the kittens are ok lol.

@loopylin

Thank you! And I love your sketch!

@highscribeofaetherium

I have no clue what exploding kittens is but thank you!

@whalekeeper

Thank you! I didn’t think of that but I totally see it now lol! (finally found another Atla fan lol)

Thank you for the useful feedback! I think I like Marcel the way he is, although I might change some…

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