@savannah_grace2009
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Trailblazer started the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 years, 8 months ago
Ok, I know I already have too many WIP’s, but I had another idea I’ve been working on this week. I’ve been doing a crazy amount of research for this one and haven’t started any writing yet, which is a bit unusual for me because usually I start writing and research what I need to know as I go. (Probably not the best method, but that’s how I roll…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
This is a new topic for my Celestiar series set on Ildin. I don’t know how many books this will be, because I’ve only been working on the first one. Again, as with the Adonial Saga, “the Ildin Saga” is a working name, but not the final one.
I’m switching my attention from the Adonial Saga to this one. I have a couple reasons why. First of all,…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @jonas @calyhuge @beth-torres @grcr @smiley @whalekeeper @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @idk
I just got a great idea, but I’m not sure if it is so great.
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Allison posted a new activity comment 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
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Allison replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
Guys……..I found the worst meme in the history of the world……🤣 😭 🤣 😭
@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @smiley @keilah-h @hybridlore @everyone
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Fynn
Fynn let out a breath he didn’t know he had been holding. “I can relate to that on so many levels.” He gave her a small smile. “Before everything happened, I didn’t have a lot of friends, at least friends who stayed around, because… well there’s lots of reasons, but if I could change one thing about that time in my li…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
When they stay in an abandoned zoo…
I looked out on the grassy plain where the seats were and took in the view. It was a really nice place.
“Imagine how much it cost to build this.” Paxton muttered, feeling a support beam for the stage ceiling.
“There’s someone!” Sam said, jumping off the giant stage and running up the sea…
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Allison replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
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Allison replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Who???😏 🤣 jkjk! -
Allison replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Thats ok! I also have, a whole bunch of others from books, movies and video games XD
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Allison posted a new activity comment 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
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@acancello
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😂 💗 Its not just me, everyone on here is great at it!
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My plot twists always feel so…cliche!!
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I dont think so! I feel like they are better than mine 🙂
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Really? XD
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Allison replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Also…I LOVE HUGO SO MUCH!!!! I might have a teensy crush on him…haha!
XDXDXD Dont worry! I have crushes on characters all the time,
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I’m so glad she’s feeling better!
@rae I’ll be praying as well! I’m glad you were able to get on a medication to help!
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @keilah-h @rae @anyone-else!
Sooo, I really enjoyed writing this snippet from my WIP. I’ve been developing their brother dynamic a lot more and I’m loving it. XD The context isn’t that important, I just wanted to share their bantering, lol.
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Glad to hear that!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
That’s awesome!! I’ll be sure to keep praying. 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Fynn
“Yeesh. Dark magic. Sounds pretty dangerous. But this school… it kind of keeps everything out, ya know? You don’t have to worry about all the crazy stuff. I don’t know how it works, but to be honest, I’m glad this place exists. It nice to not live in a fear of arrest or capture for once.” His voice had taken on a low,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Awesome!! Thanks!
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Yes!! I love him!! 😆
I have a habit of almost making too many snarky characters. Then all my dialogue ends up just bantering. 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh my goodness 😂😂
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I think that is awesome! I don’t have any theological problems with that. I tend to avoid doing robots and stuff, because I don’t believe that such a creation would have a soul, and I would usually rather avoid writing about those topics. I haven’t thought about how that would extend to a human created in a lab. There’s nothing biological about a…[Read more]
*either not dither
I don’t like to play with sentient and rational robots, honestly those creep me out. The idea of Alpha being originally a a robot made out of flesh came from me just thinking about him. It was really weird, I was talking as Alpha to his best friend Terry and it just spilled out. I was making it up as I went, but it sounded like it was a set piece…[Read more]
That makes sense to me. I think we’re pretty much on the same page.
I haven’t thought about it in depth, but from first glance, I don’t have a problem with it either. I guess it would depend also on how he was created. Did they take human DNA to create him? If that’s the case, then I think he would have a soul just like any other person, because the rest of us are created with human DNA, even though the process of…[Read more]
He was made from mixed DNA, to give him the traits Grathmere wanted. I believe most likely, he was made the weird 3D printer way at first, and developed from there.
He was actually interestingly enough, not made to have any moral compass. He was supposed to be a heartless assassin that did what Grathmere wished. He’d have limited free will, but…[Read more]
I think that’s a really good idea. I don’t find any theological issues with it. Er, I don’t really have any other comments ATM 😅
@rae
I like the idea! I think it makes sense that he would be without breath at first, and I think that God could definitely give him a soul if He chose
Ooh, ok. So I see where your doubts are coming from. Here’s my opinion…
I believe that as soon as a baby is conceived in the womb, he (referring to either gender in this case) is a human being with a soul that is loved by God. Obviously he cannot physically breathe yet because he’s only a few cells. But when he is born, God is ultimately the O…[Read more]
@rae
I really like this idea!!!
I think this is a fun idea. I don’t think there’s any theological problems. Is this your fantasy, or something else? If the first, then I wouldn’t think theological and scientific problems should be your primary concern, because what you say goes. Even if your more into hard worldbuilding, you can build up a distinct theological system that is…[Read more]
@thearcaneaxiom Yeah, this is in my sci-fi/fantasy Galaxy. Alpha is one of my main charries.
I don’t think this is too weird an idea for a sci-fi universe. It’s basically like God put literal, actual life in a body which was built, not born. Like a machine built out of flesh and bone, it was working, but it wasn’t alive quite yet. I think the way he explains it is a little strange, but that’s an explanation and can be modified a bit.
My only issue is that if his heart was going but not his breathing, he would die pretty quickly, so maybe he was effectively “dead” with neither organ working, and when they tried to “jump-start” him, his heart started but not his lungs, and then when they were confusedly trying to figure it out he started breathing.
That was a weird explanation, sorry….
It makes sense…in fact that was the way I pictured it in my mind, just Alpha sometimes says things weirdly, and leaves out parts.
I believe the term for during but still coming back to life by revival is called “clinically dead”. Not sure if Alpha falls under this or not, though…
Ok, good, it made sense…lol