SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

Ooof I’m sorry. Last time I was sick I was so dizzy I couldn’t walk up or down the stairs to my room. Its your birthday?! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!🎉 🎂 💗

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry your sick! Thats never any fun. How are you feeling now? If you are bored still you can take a look at my blog 😀       acancello.blogspot.com     it has a couple craft ideas and recipes, it needs a lot of work and I hardly ever post, but I have a great idea for a new one!

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This is the topic I mentioned 😊 I’ve got a blurb, somewhere up there *points above*

@savannah_grace2009

Right, so it’s a combination of things.

Thank you! I have a topic on one of them, and I’ll tag you in a sec.

Which authors do you take inspiration from?

I also find it interesting how our representation of God can vary in our stories. Yours is very direct and literal in its allegories, whereas someone like me takes a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Wow! That was a lot 😂 and it’s really good!

I was a bit confused in the second part of the fifth chapter. Was it from Neveah’s POV, or Ottoline’s?

@savannah_grace2009

Okay. That’s what I thought. Cool!

@savannah_grace2009

Oh… Okay, that makes more sense now. Why does everyone hate them? Did they do something or represent something in the past?

I like to write superhero-ish fantasies, with a lot of randomness and humor. Right now, I have two stories in progress. Project Sebastian, and Project Chrysanthemum (which I am probably going to change…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alright then, Sara 😉 I’m Whaley.

Ah, I actually read your prologue! Now that I’ve read this, too, maybe I have a good idea of your story. I like the name Lilitu. What are Paynes again? Do they have a special power apart from normal humans?

@savannah_grace2009

Helloooooo

We haven’t met before 😋

I’m sorry you’re sick – I have a habit of waking up early when I’m sick too. Although it’s not very early here.

So what do you like writing about, Savannah? Any special story?

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This is really cool! Even though it’s a very close allegory of Genesis 3, it feels really unique.

@savannah_grace2009

Wowww!! This is great!! I’d love to read the next chapter 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

No problem! I’m gonna try to come up with a process for outlining. If I make any breakthroughs I’ll let you know.

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KP doesn’t seem to have many articles on outlining, unfortunately. There are a lot on “pantsing,” but hardly an on outlines.

The only advice I can give is this: either outline 100% or pants 100%. If you do some outlining and then try to pants the rest, you’ll likely get stuck, not knowing how to get from one part of your ou…[Read more]

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I usually plot my stories, but I still struggle with it. I haven’t ever tried writing a story without an outline, but I don’t think I would be able to if I tried. My struggle with plotting is filling in between events. Like, I know Event A happens at some point, and Event B happens later, but I don’t know what happens in betwe…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Okay awesome!! I’ll check it out! No problem lol.

@savannah_grace2009

So far, no. But hopefully I will publish it a couple of years, I am at 20,000 words so far and working on it every day! Sometimes I post scenes on KP, I’ll tag you if I do 🙂

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Heres a rough overview of it!

Shauna Sarah Smith, a fourteen year old girl who lives in WIndy Pines witnessed the very first launching of a new moon into the atmosphere. At first everyone thought it was a great idea until the moon begins to burn pieces of the world. Everyone is in panic, but then people begin to receive…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, I just skimmed the prologue and its really good. It seriously pulls me right in. ( I will definitely read more later, but right now I’m working on my WIP) 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Welcome! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and  I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions 🙂

What’s your favorite book series?…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ooof, yeah, that’s crazy. Yeah, I get where you’re coming from. It’s hard to find friends when everyone already knows everyone, and hard feeling like an outsider too. Oh, yeah. There are a lot of people who claim to be Christians and don’t act it which is sad because it turns nonbelievers away. But I know we all have things we…[Read more]