@savannah_grace2009
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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I’ll do it! If I can figure out what character to use XD -
Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Oooh, sounds like fun!! I haven’t been doing a ton of RPing lately, so maybe I’ll hope in and do this one. 🙂
I’ll post my character description this afternoon.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ooo great! 😃 I’ll share my character, but I can’t RP right now. One question, what kind of party is it?
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Enid replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I want my allegories to be recognizeable for Christians, and its okay if others see it too, but it’s not going to follow the Bible exactly, and hidden to some extent.
Yeah, that works 😄
But I think that “powers” and special abilities are okay, as long as it doesn’t have spells or involve witches, or basically anything that th…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 Joke’s on me, I forgot I put it in the first sentence! But if you aren’t paying attention, it’s easy to miss. It’s vague, and you’d have to assume she was living there since she was born, so I should probably clarify that a little, but it’s there.
“A dull ache filled my heart as I took a last look around the house I had called…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 No, that’s a good question! I didn’t even realize I missed that, but she’s thirteen here at the beginning of the story.
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Trailblazer started the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @anyone else interested
I thought you guys might enjoy reading some of what I’ve written and giving some feedback! I have many WIPs but this is my historical fiction featuring MC Libbie Hopkins. I don’t have it divided into chapters yet (I get too locked into structure when I set up the chapters…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
*Picks up skirts and runs after you* Wait wait wait I just joined!! New characters are totally welcome!
Oh no it’s okay, Seb is more than a little selfish sometimes. It was perfectly sensible for Clement to call out 😅
Yeah I was hoping to back off so Freedom could chip in.
…Please don’t tell me you h…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Heeeyy I agree with you, our stories are so hard to explain XD
I found your allegories very easy to follow… I don’t know if that was your intention, but that’s how it read XD If I showed your prologue to a non-Christian friend, they would recognize it as the Creation and Fall story. I have no idea how they would react,…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
Yeah, as you said Whale, it definitely works, I’m just trying to figure out what the actual structure is in relation to reality, as real places such as earth are mentioned. Your answers Sara are still throwing me off because “I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone just love Eragon by Christopher Paolini? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
I just picked up this book at a yard sale because I remembered you said you loved it, lol! Haven’t read it yet, but I’ll let you know what I think!
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
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I’m honored…
aww, thank you! And don’t worry; this scene is sticking around for a while. Unless I ditch the novel, in which case I will recycle said scene. I love it very much, hehe. 😉
Aww!!! That’s so sad and yet so sweet. Great work!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 sure! That sounds cool!
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Don’t worry about it! Thank you for tagging me 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
From what I read so far, its really good! I will be checking it out from time to time (Dont worry, its not that I dont like it, I love it! But I am working on my WIP a bunch right now, 54 pages! 🙂 ) Thank you for sharing it!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Thank you for reading it!
I’m glad I’m not alone in this… struggle… lol. I might have to try spreading them out like you mentioned.
I’m very excited to share more… when I get there……perhaps half a year from now. (Just kidding, lol.) 🙃
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 That is so good! So well written, and it makes me want to read more!
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Awww, I love it! You should definitively keep it, its so sweet!
I love it! Poor Sef, at least she has Lilitu. 🙂
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