@savannah_grace2009
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
also, Rae, Franz is prob not ticklish, and even if he WAS, he wouldn’t let anyone get close enough and he’d probably push/shove them away, heh.
Okay, just very random thought. Thanks for replying!
I’m gonna go with popular vote.
At some point, I think Nae is gonna hop over to Sef.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
“Then maybe you lack self-preservation instincts,” Ariac snapped manifesting another sword in his other hand. “My patience is running out. You better explain what you want with us, or. Get. Out. Now.”
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Um, do you think we should change the turn order, because the way we’re doing it seems disj…[Read more] -
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@whalekeeper That scene with Marcel was really cool
@jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009
Felicity
The demon growled and gurgled in frustration.
Felicity snapped out of her trance in time to realize that her distraction had worked. She blinked a few times. Then she slowly began to walk forward. The magic around her still slowed down her steps and…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
Thanks, they really are 😊
Thank you!!
Yeah, that’s fair. I use more description later on. I imagine my characters pretty vividly in my head, but I don’t always write it out. Typically I sprinkle in bits of description every now and then. Like, I think in the next chapter or so, I mention Ami has blonde hair. For the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Yeah, it is really cool! Not everyone likes to use it, but I find it really helpful in the beginning stages of developing a character.
Lukas
“W-well, I guess… I guess we’ll all just have to make the best out of the time we do have together.” He smiled softly. “And you could always visit Aletheia. It’s not in its best con…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
So, this RP has a weird history. It started out pretty normal. The characters were trapped in a magic house and forced to have a party. Then it was decided to completely change it into an adventure RP. They had a lot of cool adventures, but eventually the RP started to die out. We decided to restart the adventure as a separate RP,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @rae @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @grcr
There was a mechanic in Resonancy that I had in it originally but kind of faded put without me realizing it.
It would make things more interesting, but I don’t think it will really fix my problems, because it probably wouldn’t really come into play in the first boo…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 yes she does, XD
Nae
Despite her innocent looks and questions about the meanings of words was a Nae that seemed too rarely to come through. She could sense Riker’s fear, sense the commanding, rude presence of his father, sense the quiet, scared nature of the girl in the corner. She stared up at…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
Ariac levelled his sword threateningly at the stranger.
“I’m going to make this very simple for you,” he said. “You will promise not to hurt any of us here. …Or I can kill you right now.”
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Ariac is bluffing of course, since he can’t deliberately kill.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Thanks!! Me too 😊😁
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
🤣 I love that!!!
Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)
Lukas
He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I’ve been reading through your WIP lately. I think I’m gonna try to read through the whole thing then come back with critiques. So it might be awhile before you get any feedback. Idk. I’ll try to read fast tho and get to the parts you were concerned about. (:
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-lol
Made another moodboard for Lukas just cuz… 😁
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Actually, someone I know calls me magical because on certain days, I just seem to disappear and reappear. It’s all just me going off to my own shadows and them not paying attention.
It’s funny, because on dark nights I always slink off, and other kids think I’m trying to hide or be sneaky. They tell me they can see me,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @beth-torres @anyone-else-sticking-around
I am agonizing over who to add and literally cannot choose, so I’mma let y’all pick. XD
Options… (and I am more than willing to add two)
Easton
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Lukas
“Wh-what? Did you, um, say-say something?” He searched her face.
“Nothing.” She smiled and shook her head.
Lukas frowned. He knew what she had said… “Why you?” He repeated, his voice low and tender. “Because—” he sighed. “I’ve never had anyone in my life who was more than a friend, but if I did, I know you’d be the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @rae
Lukas shocked EVERYONE!!! *evil laugh* 🤣
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
And there’s also Bloodsong, who will show up with Kate in a bit.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@loopylin @rae @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12
Alright. You guys want the drama? You guys want the drama?? TAKE it
Babs
Felicity had sufficiently distracted the demon. Chase latched onto it with his fangs, and now the monster seemed almost spent, its flesh boiling madly from agitation.
But Babs still had to hold Marcel over the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 SOB!!!! AHHHH!!! That’s so good!! But also so terrible!! But awesome writing!!!
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Oh okay! Thanks! (:
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