SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

I agree with what Ellette said.
You should keep it! 🙃

@savannah_grace2009

I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.

I say keep it

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh my goodness. 🤯

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, I never read the prologue you posted…sorry. I’ll get to it this weekend.

@stephie

Forgot to return here.

The last chapter I wrote was 2,546 words long, so I think I got through all those snowballs.

Now I have 20. What to do with them?

Throws 4 at each of the following:
@theducktator
@grcr
@highscribeofaetherium
@savannah_grace2009
@theshadow

Welp… I wrote a short story! XD

If you have the time, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it before I show it to friends and family. (It’s kinda long, I apologize, lol. It’s under 11k.)

Tagging some folks just in case you’re interested, but don’t feel obligated to read it. :))

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @savannah_grace2009

No worries! This week got really busy and I got sick halfway through, so I probably wouldn’t have been able to RP very soon afterwards anyway. Where should we start Lukas and Livia? I have no idea what day it is in relation to the dance (which has been planned for like forever now…it’s craaazzzyyyy 😂)

@savannah_grace2009

Hello, nice to meet you. I believe this is are first time interacting! : )

I don’t really know how to make a mood board, but I know how to rant about a character I made that I hate/love! Would anyone be able to teach me how to make one?

@elishavet-pidyon

Aw, I won’t throw snowballs at you then. Truce.

*Whips around* @rae +2 @mineralizedwritings +2 @hybridlore +2 @savannah_grace2009 +2 @calyhuge +2 @loopylin +4

@hybridlore @theshadow @savannah_grace2009 ❤️

Thank you guys so much. :’)

@savannah_grace2009

😂🤣

Oy, the life of a writerrr 💀

@savannah_grace2009

I’m not 100% sure either 🤣

Ok that makes sense! 😉 Yeah, I could always take a snippet of it and write it how I would interpret a four year old thinking through that if you wanted an example. (i don’t know if that’s weird or not 😂)

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]

@rae    @savannah_grace2009

Ooo, that sounds great! I’d love to terrorize Chase and Sef.

@ellette-giselle

Can I bring the Agents back?

Please!

 

🙂

Considering who you tagged, are you planning to break up Sef and Chase’s reunion? Cuz if Chase has to fight the Agents too, he would probably die, and at very least be asleep for days. He’s used his power a lot the past day.

@savannah_grace2009

I think I’d like to go with the aunt…[Read more]

🫸🏻⚪️ @liberty

🫸🏻⚪️ @savannah_grace2009

Sorry I haven’t been very active for a while. School and illness got in the way.

@RAE and @RAXFORGE

I  just realized I never replied here. Hurray!!!! I was shipping you two!!!

@the_lost-journal

I look forward to your return!

@savannah_grace2009

YOU’RE BACK!!! *hugs* It’s good to see you again! I’m sorry about your mom, and I’m still praying…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009  @esther-c  @rae

Can I bring the Agents back?

Please!

🙂

@savannah_grace2009

do you wanna write the first RP, or me?

@savannah_grace2009

So…I have an option…what if Chase’s aunt, who will taking guardianship of him, comes to here to try and bond with Chase and we deal with that? Or do you want to do something else? I’m good with whatever you would like to do, that’s just an option