@savannah_grace2009
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 5 hours ago
Praying!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 5 hours ago
Praying for both of your family members.
@anyone
Speaking of family, could you guys please pray for my two older brothers? One has stopped speaking to us and is no longer Christian and the other, while he’s open to the faugh, has also left it. Thanks.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 5 hours ago
Awesome! Thanks!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 5 hours ago
Praying for him!! <33
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 5 hours ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 5 hours ago
Thank you so much!!
This piece could belong to a longer story where you’d learn the two girls’ conflict with each other, but it’s written so that it’s not needed.
Funnily enough, I’m thinking of using these characters (who are characters from some of my first ever stories) in something, idk what yet though.
I love that line as well!!!…
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 days, 5 hours ago
I feel attacked.I’ll try to get to it this week… hopefully. We’ve got to write the next chapter as well. -
TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 5 hours ago
Ah yes, I can see why you are asking that. We are taught both that we should confess both big and little sins. (Which we call Mortal and Venial sins) but if you have Eucharist with venial sins on your soul all those venial sins are forgiven.
Good to know, thanks!
Yeah, that was a lot so I am unsure what to respond to first 😅 when…
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
I also thought unions burning peoples eyes was a myth until my friend and I were cooking stir fry and she started tearing up really bad while cutting them. 🤣
It’s hard to cook when you anthropomorphize your vegetables.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
That’s a lot of note cards. That does look convenient though, having those dividers and everything stored vertically.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
Thanks!
wait… your hand cramps from writing? Mine never did that. I thought it was a myth.
I have a bad habit of gripping and pressing on things to far. Since I’ve done so much drawing, and have trained myself to do lighter strokes there, it’s not an issue, but I need to train myself to do it with writing as well.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
Hmm… That is a good point about Elsa’s powers. As far as we can tell once she learns to control her powers, she just seems to will things to happen.
I think I do want to stick with the idea for Alan having visions of magic capturing him. I think this adds a thematic element that will make Alan’s struggle more real without…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
good work!!
wait… your hand cramps from writing? Mine never did that. I thought it was a myth.
but I also thought unions burning peoples eyes was a myth until my friend and I were cooking stir fry and she started tearing up really bad while cutting them. 🤣
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
@whalekeeper @theducktator @ellette-giselle
My progress today. I wrote down on sticky notes everything I knew so far about the plot.
Pink notes are what I already had planned from Alan’s perspective when I started this. Green is Martha’s Perspective. The blue and yellow at the top are some alternative ideas I had for the beginning. All the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
oh my goodness. She’s a horrible mother. 😂
(and I feel bad for laughing)
I was actually thinking about the magic. It seems to be thought based. Like yours. At first it seems emotion based, but then when I rewatched “let it go” to see if I was right, it seems more thought based. Whatever it is, we aren’t told how she’s c…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 6 hours ago
Yes, I have seen Frozen, and I think I know what you are getting at. Elsa, like Alan, worries about her powers and hurting others with them but needs to learn not to push others away. If you go back to when you were asking us which characters are like our own, Whaley, you will notice Elsa was one of the characters…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
Hybrid pointed that out to me too. For this chapter specifically, I wanted it to feel pretty fast paced, specifically when she got to the party. Do you think that worked?
Ah, okay then that makes sense. It did work pretty well, the chapter felt fast paced. Not in a bad way though, it introduced the characters and world efficiently.
Let…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 7 hours ago
Lucky, I try to draw stuff fast then end up erasing it aggressively lol.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 7 hours ago
I had a feeling I needed to hear this. Thank you for the advice, I really do need to listen to it. I’m a bit of a perfectionist so it’s going to be hard to post stuff as it is, but thank you again.
Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and gra…
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