SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@liskaboyce

You literally just answered the question I’ve been asking myself: why have I never finished first drafts? It’s because the middle of my book always feels forced!!!

There you have it! When I talk with people, either about my own work or theirs, that section in between the inciting incident and the midpoint is almost always the pro…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

ah, I see, I see.

thats so exciting !! Eeeee I need to find some time to say hello to everyone. ✨

@loopylin

Rallascant, you fuzzy snitch. You’re the opposite of a lucky rabbit’s foot.

I do appreciate your sass, but this is remarkably unhelpful.

@reaganramm

Also, “Did you receive the Holy Spirit when you believed?”

It’s a separation wonderful, glorious, and empowering part of the relationship!

@whalekeeper Do ittt

@whalekeeper @rae @keilah-h this doesn’t directly affect your characters yet but im tagging you anyway

Rallascant

Rallascant had been shooed away from the vegetable garden by the local Iris many times, but this time he was sure he would get away with it. He sat among the green leaves, legs and rabbit ears tucked in to remain as unnoticeable as…[Read more]

@reaganramm
WOW.

I love when people know the Word and use the Word to explain the Word. I agree in so many areas!

SO!  😁😁😁 I actually was doing some study yesterday on baptism, from a section I don’t believe you mentioned, and I thought was cool!!!

Colossians 2:11-12. When we strip away the prepositional phrases, we can see how the main verb…[Read more]

@stellybean

I don’t even know how I feel about Cliff anymore. I feel like one second I might like him, but then the next second he’s like a sweaty, suspicious athlete.

I mean… It’d be an unusual experience 😂

OooOoOOOOooo. Awesome sauce.

@lillian

(Okay before I reply, I wanna say I’m sorry cause I messed up my last post so bad.  I was trying to edit a typo in my post… and I accidentally tagged the word typo 😭 That’s embarrassing…)

Okay! Anyhoodles…

I read the chapter and watched the video! The concept of your setting with the dragons is very interesting. It kinda r…[Read more]

@liberty Also praying for you

I have the desire to add a new little guy to this. A guy with fun frilly sleeves

@koshka @loopylin

Moth

Well done. Moth’s chest rose a little.

He tilted his head in a sort of shrug, eying his attempt. It looked like he had some skill – even though that was not true. His initial wish for the shot had been much humbler. “I must make offerings to serendipity in my sleep. How do I know where the arrowhead will fly?”

@liskaboyce

Yeah, the middle part of a story is always the weirdest part. Koshka and Quicksilver made good points. I think a huge part of it is coming up with obstacles, and then connecting them to lead to the midpoint.

Follow-up question. Is it possible that the structure isn’t the issue, but that it’s incredibly difficult to think of actual…[Read more]

@koshka

I’ll see if I can borrow this through my library! I was planning to get into my local library this week anyway. Interlibrary loans should give me access to this.

I haven’t read Adorning the Dark, but I’ve heard of it. I’ve heard good things about it. It has a lovely title.

@grcr

In the space of a couple days, we’ve started making new accounts for people again, and this is the result. Lots of people. 😅

This is awesome! Congrats to Whaley and Koshka for becoming mods (I already congratulated Ellette on being the Queen of KP)

@lillian

I’d love to read this! I saw some stuff about your characters on another topic and they dound awesome.

I’m currently heading to church right now, but I definitely want to look at this! 😄

@stellybean

Hi Stelly! Welcome to KP! I’m so happyyyy!

Here are my questions!

Who is your LEAST favorite Glitchy *Glitch Society* character?

Would you rather have a pet dragon, or be able to turn into the dragon?

Have you ever written a long poem about one of your characters?