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@devastate-lasting

Oh, my word! That is so beautiful! I love the blue hues and the iridescent tinting and how the shadows reflect the vase’s color:)

@issawriter7

@daisy-torres

I just finished reading the prologue. I actually don’t have any critiques for it; it was amazing:D

@libby

Those sound like great characters! 🙂

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Those are awesome characters, I especially like Faye:)

@Kathleenramm @devastate-lasting @nova21 @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @writerlexi1216 @scoutfinch180 @wyn-rose @gracie-j

Everyone has such awesome characters! 😀

@kathleenramm

Ooo, fun idea!!  Let’s see…  None of my characters in Lioness are very fun/nice/not-scarred (heh heh 😬), so I’d probably be someone from As Dark As Mist and Shadow.  I think I’d be Murin, because she’s an awesome spy with an awesome sidekick who lives in an awesome place with an awesome attitude.  And she rides horses all the ti…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Congrats!!

Well, I’m still trying to balance two writing projects, as well as alpha-reading for Kayleigh.  My entire grade at my school got sent home because of a COVID case, so I have plenty of time on my hands now, lol!!  I’m not very far into either of my WIPs (about two chapters each), but since I have the time, I’ll p…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

I love this sooo much!!!  Great job, Lexi!!! 🎉  To answer your questions,

1)  I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!

2)  Yes, I would!!!  I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?

3)  I think the pacing is great!!

Great job!!!!! 💛

@writerlexi1216

Hey Lexi!!  I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!!  Super excited!!!!  Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉

@e-k-seaver

Hey Em!!  I loved your story!!  Sooo good!!  I don’t really have many critiques, just watch out for some repetitive words.  And maybe give Celeste a stronger goal/personality trait?  I felt like I was reading from Melia’s POV a lot of the time (which wasn’t necessarily a bad thing 😉) cause Celeste isn’t a bold character.  I say this…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

Sounds great! I’ll give you the feedback ASAP:)
(I give everybody this warning: I’m a pretty slow reader:)

@godlyfantasy12

That is an excellent idea! I’m going to have to get the printer operational and do that. Thanks you:D

@godlyfantasy12

That’s alright, the post showed up in my notifications bar:)
Congrats on your word count! You can totally make the 30,000 milestone tomorrow! New lights sound super cool too *sigh* I really don’t have a single place to hang up my character aesthetics… but if I did, I’d be going nuts hanging them up everywhere XD

As for my WIP,…[Read more]

(Okay, maybe that belonged in the meme topic:)

@nova21 @devastate-lasting

Those are beautiful:)