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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@loopylin @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Moth
“What sort of lessons will there be, do you think?” Moth asked.
Ellis opened his mouth to answer. Before he could, the dining hall hushed.
Headmaster Howell himself stood at the front of the room, about to say a few words. He had just gotten up from his place next to the professors, whe…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@koshka @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper
Poor wolf is so naive. And he also doesn’t read people well. At least at this stage.
Wolfgang
He blinked. “Sorry, what? I don’t know what you mean. Are those words your country’s name? They can’t be your age, unless you have a different numeric system too. That would be funny,” He lau…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Moth
Moth’s voice faded. He rocked his knee back and forth, face partially hidden behind it. “That’s what I’ve been told. This is a thing both good and bad.”
He idly kicked his foot back and forth. “Have you… been here long? What do you think of it? That’s what you asked me, so I’m just going to ask it back.”
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Awwww, I love this kid. Not entirely sure what this all means but I love him anyway.
XD Thanks. The quick explanation is that the twin protagonists of my WIP bond with him, and make him their honorary third brother.
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
“I have two human brothers.” Soft pride seeped into his voice. “They were the first people I ever met, after they got lost in faerie land. That was before I knew about this place. It is a long story.”
Awwww, I love this kid. Not entirely sure what this all means but I live him anyway.
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
No, just pushed his chair back from the table to get a little space. Probably should have specified.
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Poor Lois. He might regret taking that seat XD
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Moth
“I have two human brothers.” Soft pride seeped into his voice. “They were the first people I ever met, after they got lost in faerie land. That was before I knew about this place. It is a long story.”
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Ooooh, I knew these boys would clash. The major problem here is that Ari was already irritated at Wolfgang.
Ari
For a moment he just stared at the boy. Impudent, noisy, irritating…
If he was Halir, he would laugh. If he was Heral, he would just walk away. But he was Ari, and what did Ari do?
It you want friends…his…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Imagine if Ari lost his cool and actually punched him
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Wolfgang
He grinned. “Ari Verenion, that’s not German I’ll wager. Where are you from? How old are you? Oh,” He held out his hand to shake. “I’m Wolfgang Von Heinz– the first,” he added with a wink.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper So accurate LOL.
@loopylin @keilah-h (funny thing, I keep typing your KP tag on Unvale and then confusing myself when your username doesn’t pop up XD.)
Gabriel
“I’m supposed to name it?” He questioned, peering at it in his free hand. For a second he had thought they were an earring until Lucy gave an explanation. “I never name…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
O_O
Ari
He nearly choked on his spiced wine. The boy beside him stared back with laughing eyes…Ari’s face darkened.
“You ask many questions.”
At the sound of his voice a few long time students nearby flinched and shrank away. Ari ignored them in favor of another sip of wine. It was little more than spiced grape cordial, but…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @anyone else
kp just ate my post.
Wolfgang
Breakfast was a matter of minutes. When that all important task was complete, Wolfgang leaned back with a glass of milk and another muffin in his hand. He ate the muffin in two bites and drained the glass, setting it down with a careful bang. “That was very good, almost l…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
I find that it is kind of difficult to actively try to make a story idea less cliche. In my opinion, execution is more important than the ideas themselves, so it’s definitely possible to work with concepts that are somewhat cliche without it feeling cliche.
It has been a while since I read anything from your story, so I p…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I also love how literally almost everyone is wiped out or in turmoil and we’ve only been here one night.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Haha! I want to see so many more!! XD
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Moth
“Lucien… Jack Celby. I’ll remember. I can address them in passing. They will try to remember if they’ve met me before, same as you wondered.”
Laugh lines framed Moth’s eyes. They were the only sign – outside of what he said – proving he was being playful.
“You are lucky to have your brother with you,” he added.
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Moth
“Not many,” Moth admitted. “I arrived last night. I met Lois Thorne first. Flax was there, too. Then I met Ari not long before retiring for the night.”
Three new acquaintances felt like a lot, but in the grand scheme of things, it wasn’t.
He pulled his feet up onto his seat, folded his hands together, and propped them on his…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Moth
“Yes. I was just thinking, I’ve never seen so many people before. It’s wonderful. I… might try to learn everyone’s names. Don’t you think that would be good? Everyone likes to be known by name.”
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