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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @rae ok but I’m almost tempted to drop Mundy in here so he can yell at everyone (with the possible exception of Jaylen) being in what he thinks is his house lol.
should I do it? I was planning on keeping him out of this, but…….
Jaylen
“So sorry to bother you. Is there a reason I’m here?” the scaly creature asked…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae @whalekeeper Imma add a new character despite having a bunch already. I might regret this later. He’s about 15 and I think he’s from a normal modern setting.
Mr. Gregory
Another student was already in the nurse’s office. A boy, human as far as Gregory could tell, sat on a stool, swinging his legs and holding a mug of tea in both hands.…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Sorry… I can’t really think of what to write at the moment so I’m probably not going to add anything right this second.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper ooh are you joining?
Jaylen
Mayfly created the letters again, this time in the dragons’ languages. When she laughed, the letters jiggled.
She splashed Silvanis again just as someone knocked on the door.
“I’ll get it.” Jaylen pulled the door open to see a curious scaled creature. He wasn’t a dragon, but he didn’t look like…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Sebastian
Seb snatched the hat back from Dante and rubbed the rim self-consciously. “Snitch.”
The alien boy smirked, and held up a green pocketbook. A couple photos peeked out.
Seb quickly took it back. “Sneak.”
A handkerchief, an asthma inhaler, and a music box the size of a baby’s fist.
“Pilferer. Poacher. Future kleptomania…[Read more] -
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper ok @rae everything’s the same except it was the brunette who chased Chase and then Gregory came out to see what the commotion was about.
People
At Mr. Gregory’s command, the brunette teacher ran to tell the nurse what happened. The kids crowded around their injured companion in morbid curiosity.
“Give ‘im some space,” Gregory…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Wyoh, what the heck dude
@rae @whalekeeper
Ok, I’m sorry I know I just said I’m fine with people writing Mr. Gregory, but I think he’s smart enough to not run after or physically grab Chase since he’s obviously very anxious and acting like a rabbit in a trap right now.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@loopylin @rae @beth-torres (if you’re planning to interact ;))
Sebastian
As the pale-faced boy was carried away by the hand of punishment, Seb could only blink obliviously. “The Chase is chased yet again.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae oh ok! All the ideas you’ve told us so far are really interesting though.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
How does your alien manage to be socially appealing and completely clueless at the same time? XD
Hi! :] Yes, Navin. There is always a possibility they bite XD
Sebastian
“I still carry illegal firearms,” Seb muttered.
”What was that?”
“I think we can all agree, I started it. So I take full responsibility sir,” t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
idk I have too many characters in one room help
“Well.” Gregory raised his eyebrows in slight surprise. “That was not on the list of reasons I have you here, but I very much appreciate the honesty.”
Ellie crossed her arms and gave Seb an indignant look. “I act entirely on my own free will, thankyouverymuch.”
“So you all helpe…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fairytale AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Hunter
Mayfly splashed Silvanis again.
Not that he didn’t deserve it for being such a grump.
Then she spelled twelve letters in the air, six for her and six for him. She then intertwined her fingers.
“Together? Two of us?” Jaylen guessed next to Hunter. “Or no, that looks too long for that word she’s making. Assuming her writing system…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@esther
Sorry, everyone!
Thank you, Trailblazer, for helping me!
Here is the link to read my book:
file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html
Make sure you copy the entire line.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae what’s wrong with cryptid stories? Not that I’m defending them. I don’t even know what they are besides stories of someone looking for a mysterious animal.
Maybe don’t look them up if you find so much dark stuff, and write the story a different way, looking at something else for inspiration. “Adventurer/journalist discovers a scary,…[Read more]
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Liberty started the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@esther
Hi everyone!
I’ve not been on KP in a while…I kind of forgot about it during life, but recently I’ve steadily worked on my first-ever printed book! I didn’t say published, because I’m not publishing it. At least, not yet. Currently,…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
XD He’s nothing if not a fair player. Let the blame go where it is due.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
So, Chase has two book ideas rolling around… Then that would make The Shyiad kinda like an origin story, explaining the second.
Aaah, got it! Makes sense!!
Yeah, don’t blaim you. The Shyiad is kinda just a coming of age fantasy while the Black Wolf is kinda cryptid genre. And I personally find cryptid stories often go too far.
I don’t mind…[Read more]
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freedom posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae Hiiii girl!! I was curious (and only share if you want to!), have you learned anything new about your great-grandfather that was possibly in the German military during WW2?
OH, and I’ve wanted to tell you…I recently learned that two of my great uncles were both in the US Army during WW2…they died long before I was born tho, but it’s…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I’m still plotting out, but I think most of the first half will be Kat discovering Chase is the Black Wolf and thenthe second half, her helping him discover what lives in this region of the forest.
Would you want to read this (especially not knowing who Chase is?)
Ooh, interesting… I probably wouldn’t buy the book based the premise, but t…[Read more]
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One, that is really cool!
Two, I actually have! I discovered a printed document written by my Great grandfather to my uncle and dad. And it is confirmed that he was a French POW and he was in the army. He mentioned very little about his war life, but the thing was only a couple pages. I have tried to look him up a couple more times online, but all…[Read more]
Oh! I also meant to share this story with you. My Grandma told it to me in one of our many talks, and it has stuck with me forever. I believe it was even the same weekend that we first heard about Great Grandfather helping Jews.
When my Grandpa and Grandma were engaged and soon to be married in just days, my Great Grandfather was on a trip to…[Read more]
Yesss, it was sooo cool to find out!! I’m planning on requesting military records from the National Archives (I’ve done it once before when researching someone else) at least for one of my Great Uncles.
It is possible (if the wound was actually related to combat and not just a “war story” he told😂) that one of my Great Uncles never received a…[Read more]
Okay, that is triple cool! I hope you can find that out, cuz that would be awesome!!!!
I’ve tried finding German records, but I’ve been able to find anything. I’ve got a feeling they weren’t legit sites either. Plus, the Search Engines get confused with someone name Dr. Hans Eisele when I type in my Great grandfather’s name (Hans Ulrich Eisele)…[Read more]
Yessss, I’m really hoping I can figure it out too!
Yes, that sounds very difficult/frustrating😅 It’s also very difficult because many WW2 German military records have been destroyed, given that Germany was practically in rubbles by the time the war finally ended.
It’s definitely hard to find records like that bc of that.
Given, most high up…[Read more]
It is interesting tho (and many Americans are, but you know XD) that both of us are descended from Germans.
My grandfather (Dad’s side) has something that talks about how his family on his mom’s side came to the USA from Germany in the 1700s before the USA was even founded!
Which is also really cool tbh😂
Another great Uncle of mine was in the Air…[Read more]
I didn’t mean “high up” (my brain💀)…what I meant was most military records were likely held in Berlin.
idk why I added the “high up” part. XD
So, I don’t remember if I told you this or not, but I found my great grandfather’s grave. He’s buried in Hartford, capital of Connecticut.
I also discovered you can request WWII records! I have to fill out some German forms, which is great cuz it looks like I can only fill out the German versions, not the English translations and I haven’t been…[Read more]