Ruth

@Rae (forgot to tag you earlier lol)

Also, what is the end goal of your plot? Reuniting the galaxy and reversing what Grathmere did while working with him? I recommend making Grathmere somewhat morally relatable (think Edmund Dantes from The Count of Monte Cristo)

@rae

Your smile is one.

*squeaks uncharacteristically*

Hugo

“If you aren’t horribly offended, I’ll just call you Miss Nar, please.”

He had never met someone truly familiar with an emperor-run system before. However, an emperor was more or less a dictator, which wasn’t too far from his own world. He hoped her world wasn’t consumed by organized m…[Read more]

@rae

That’s good! ☺️

@rae

That cold I caught on vacation still hasn’t gone away entirely, and then I caught some sort of stomach flu yesterday. I made it through without throwing up, luckily.

@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009

Not sure if it’s necessary, but I forgot tags on that RP.

@rae

No, I haven’t. I spent all of yesterday sick on the couch, so I haven’t had time to think about this since I posted it.

@rae

I know….I think Wyoh’s going too far…

@rae

Hugo

Hugo half-hissed, half-laughed, “I’m sure whatever you just said was a good thing, Miss Nar.”

He had practically forgotten his manners in this modern world. For the first time that night, two spots of red glowed on his cheeks.

@loopylin

You got thissssss XDXD I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.

@rae

…Everyone does stupid stuff XD BUT I would not call you stupid. You have an innocent track record on here, and that would be unnecessarily villainous of me.

It’s official, Nar has a crush on Hugo already.

OH MYYy that’s so sweet of her!

I just hope he…[Read more]

Babs

“Oh Baaaaaaabs…” The Vinlin’s warm, boyish face turned to her, streaked with dark curls. He tied his coat around his waist and held out his hands. “Come on!”

Babs fussed with her clothes and hair one moment too long, and he pulled her onto the dance floor.

With a squeak, she tried her very best – but what was she supposed to focus on? H…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae @vinagirl @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @acancello @hybridlore @anyone-else

Okay, guys. I need serious help. My novel is kind of going nowhere…because I don’t know which way to start it!!!

I have two beginnings for my story. One jumps straight into…[Read more]

The dancing has begun!

Hehehe…

Alright, I’ll write some RPs

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

Lukas swallowed hard and faced Liv with an uncertain smile wobbling on his lips. “Well?” He held out his arms.

@rae (I said in here that Chase was dancing, but I don’t know what you decided to do)

Callista

She smiled, all tears dried, and met Fynn’s ey…[Read more]

@rae

I see… I would recommend thinking of a theme/topic to intertwine each story into and have the ending be a culmination of that theme/topic to communicate your message in the character’s actions and choices, and how they’re rewarded/punished. E.g. Star Wars (I block quoted it for spoilers, if you haven’t seen them yet and spoilers bother…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, thx, he loves making people happy, it makes him happy 😊

Hugo

The dance was so simple, Hugo could do it with his eyes closed. And he did. Holding Nar’s hands gently, he glided through the steps, and tilted his head up with a blissful smile.

When Nar did a funny spin under one arm, the slender boy laughed and gave her another twirl. H…[Read more]

@rae

I cringe at you’re writing of the last rp, it really doesn’t sound like your style.

 
@criticizingrae
 
Yeah…apparently my brain was dead.
@rae

You should rewrite it.

 
@criticizingrae
Yeah, I think I shall. But probably not rn.
 
@everyone ignore my last rp.

@freedomwriter76 @jonas @rae

Sef

She flinched back at the man’s voice.

It reminded her of too much….

No. She would not think about Iver now….

Cowering back into the shadows, she hoped he wouldn’t notice her. Or ask her any questions.

@everyone

…I’m just going to answer my own question and start the practice 😅😊

@rae

Hugo

“Why should you apologize? Look at that,” Hugo beamed. He rolled down his sleeve and spun his arm like a pinwheel.

Nar slung her satchel around to her opposite shoulder. Her face flushed faintly with confidence.

Hugo looked at her again, checked himself…[Read more]

@rae

Ok that helps me understand the overall story better, so you’re basically going for something very similar to Star Wars (before Disney got a chokehold on it 😭) but with a Christian worldview writing it, and probably some of Joseph’s story from Genesis thrown in.

I recommend Odd 1s Out’s video on pitching a show to help when explaining to…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @rae

I’ll be praying for you guys! I’m sorry it’s been so rough.