@rae
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 hours, 12 minutes ago
@rae Hehehe Alpha has more knives than social skills
Dante
“Oi…” Dante growled. He straightened his posture and crossed his arms. “I might be smaller than you, but I’m tougher than I look. Survived this long. And I don’t have some stupid needle phobia.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 25 minutes ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 11 hours, 15 minutes ago
I would say it was fulfilled rather than changed. The Bible says not a dot not an iota will go away and nothing will change. (Murdering the wording, but that’s the raw meaning)
Otherwise yeah! Looking forward to the next part.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 18 minutes ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 14 hours, 5 minutes ago
this was another good section. I feel like you’re really sinking into a good style and voice with this. I had a slight problem with one sentence though.
When Immanuel came, the laws God previously had placed changed.
I don’t see that in the Bible. If anything, the laws were reinforced more strongly. (You have heard it said do not commit adu…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 14 hours, 39 minutes ago
@rae oooh! His old friend came to stay where he was, that’s nice!
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 16 hours, 11 minutes ago
Oh, okay. Um, I don’t imagine a beaver dam being that bad. But I know for sure you shouldn’t say it.
Hm, I feel bad for everything the jews have gone through in history! All the accounts from the Bible, the pogroms, holocaust, and modern days people trying to remove them.
But I do not agree with the LGBQ blah blah blah stuff.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 7 hours ago
Dante
For probably the tenth time since they first met, Dante was thankful that Alpha seemed to consider him a friend, or at least someone who wasn’t a threat.
He laughed nervously. “Uhh, no. I haven’t heard anything. Do you… normally go around stabbing people in the gut? I mean, I get the boredom thing, but there are less bloody ways to…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 16 hours ago
Hmm. I’ve written some fight scenes, but am not overly satisfied with them. I just make the characters bang their blades around for a bit until I feel it is time to make someone win. I did a little bit of research on sword fighting to improve it a bit.
I like @whalekeeper‘s advice though, about using surroundings to both hinder and help…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 17 hours ago
I personally am disgusted by most of them
AMEN!
Kanye West recently started selling a shirt with a black swastika, just hours after releasing pro-Nazi, anti-Jew tweets. I have since removed the song from my playlist.
WAIT WHAT!!!!! sorry for the caps, but WHAT?! I did not know about this! I just knew that he existed! Nothing else!!
To me,…
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 9 hours ago
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 12 hours ago
Thanks for the article! Unfortunately I’m not very good at fight scenes either, so I won’t be much help. 🙁
More tags: @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @grcr @the_lost-journal @theshadow
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 22 hours ago
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore@raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power@freed_and_redeemed and @thearcaneaxiom!
Hello again everyone! I have a question about some stuff today!
- What are your thoughts…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 17 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 19 hours ago
@rae that was awesome!
“Finally a fellow you like, and he’s a possible assassin.” Dr. Handel shook his head. “I will never understand a girls’ attractions.
Neither do I, and I’m a girl who the only fellow she likes is a (fortunately fictional) assassin too, apparently.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 20 hours ago
I will be more annoyed if you save people who need to die for character arc or story purposes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 20 hours ago
and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆
Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 14 hours ago
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whaley started the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 16 hours ago
So, Topic of the Week! Do we want to start it up again somehow? Please discuss here – if you want it to come back, or if you have any strong opinions about how it should be revitalized.
I’m hesitant to take Kathleen’s job. However, I have plenty of ideas of my own, and would be delighted to do it myself. If this becomes the game plan, I am eager…[Read more]
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